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LoremIpsum 2008-10-03 ch 12, anon.	abuseI about gave up on you finishing this. Although I still go back from time to time and reread it because it's so good. -LoremIpsum previously fantomfairy
smileyaili 2008-09-30 ch 12, anon.	abusestay up till onethirty the other night reading this. and im not riley, so i had a very hard time popping up the next day. very very good. original and lovely. maybe you could write a story about some of rileys foster parents. anyway really liked this and keep writing.
Catherine 2008-09-11 ch 12, anon.	abusec'mon! i want to see riley meet ben's dad. I still check your story everyday, you know, even if there doesn't appear to be much chance for it to be finished. Catherine
fictitiousshore 2008-09-10 ch 12,	abuseI adore this story! Is there a chance that it will be updated any time soon? Rereading it is fun but I would love to have the rest too. You've just done a phenomenal job with this, so I'd hate to think it's going to go unfinished...
brobdignagian 2008-09-07 ch 12,	abuseAw, come on! Update! Update! Update! I wanna see how the rest of the story ends up! ...Please?
Queen of Forums 2008-09-01 ch 12,	abuseAwesome~
Anna-Lisa-for-Drake-Bell 2008-08-28 ch 12,	abuseWhy don't you update?? I'm waiting every day!
AA Battery 2008-08-26 ch 12, anon.	abuseHey! not loggin in now- but I just wanted to let you know (again) how FANTASTIC this story truely is. I mean- I just sit and read all of it whenever im in the mood (which can be often). Not to be a huge bother, but I'm praying that you are planning on finishing this- and soon! I mean, I am so excited for Riley/Ben's Dad interaction and for Ben to find out Riley's other secret (real age?) that i can hardly stand it! PLEASE update soon! and so sorry to be a pest! I just love this story! thanks for such a wonderful tale, ~aa battery
Anna 2008-08-20 ch 12, anon.	abuseOh man Does Riley finally realise that he is really important for Ben?? Can you please update?? I love your story so much and I adore the friendships between Ben and Riley!! The hug was so cute, when Riley started to count.
Anna 2008-08-20 ch 7, anon.	abuse"Yes. Because he is special!" SQUEE, Wow, you are such a amazing writer!!
Anna 2008-08-20 ch 6, anon.	abuseI really love how you write!! You descripe everithig SO brilliant! "I stood there for a moment, arms full of comp. sci. major..." OH MY GOD Ben is so a good friend! I also loved when he tried to calm Riley down!! I LOVE RILEY cute
Anna 2008-08-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseHow CUTE! "They knew to watch for it." OMG how sweet!
Valentine Satiguss 2008-08-03 ch 12,	abuseMy.. my eye. It's twitching. I'm torn apart from doing two things. One is to somehow find a way to hug(glomp) you. The other is find some legal way to hunt you down for not updating this since January (unlikely, but as a fangirl, I should try). I... I just want to say that I really, really love your story. I love Riley. I love how you portray him. I wish I could give him a Paul-hug too. Ben's awesome. He's cool and nice and saving Riley's life at the moment by giving him the (awesome) power of friendship. Gosh, I just hope there's another chapter. I really do. I want to see what Thanksgiving's like when Riley meets Ben's dad. And the whole thing's still in a flashback. I need to see what happens in the present after the whole story's been told (with Abigail and what-not). Please. Please update. You've written one incredible story. There aren't many National Treasure fanfictions out there. Yours is one of those that are truly worthwhile to read. You and your story are both spectacular, even inspirational. I'd really be happy if there's a happy ending. It'd be kinda (really, really, really) cool. Sincerely, Valentine Satiguss
Chocochino11 2008-07-20 ch 12,	abusethis story is so awesome... please update soon!
brianna x3 2008-07-12 ch 12,	abuseo_o This story is...amazing. Speechless.

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