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WayToTheDawn9428
2008-07-27
ch 7,
abuseT_T That was the saddest thing ever.

Thank you for being realistic and killing him. I hate it when people don't kill off people who are going to die just for a happy ending.
neko-jin72
2008-05-22
ch 7,
abuse"Just to visit an old friend."--you made me cry with that last sentence! even though it was sad, it was really good! man, seriously, that was really really good.
Tenshi no Yoko
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseDon't mind me, I'm just a little review... xD (Puppy dog eyes)

I whisper in your ear
The words you want to hear
You feel the wind and it reminds you
It happens everytime
You stop and close your eyes
You can't deny what lives inside you
Well I know it's hard to see
What is meant to be
When yesterday is so far behind you
Deep inside your soul knows I'm always there
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
The tides take a turn
Another lesson learned
I'm right here but still you wonder
Would you say that you need more
And it's not what it was before
It was before your on your own and going under
Deep inside your soul knows I'm always there
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
Whenever you wake up
Whenever you gave up
All that you had for nothing at all
The bed that you lay in
Remember you made it
And nobody's there to catch you when you fall
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
MikoKriszty
2008-02-14
ch 7,
abuseOh no. I'm all teary. There are only a handful of fics that made me teary... And this is one of them.
You should warn us. I can't stand sad ending. No doubt, this story was beautiful, and worth reading, but at the same time, it was so sad... You should change the genre to tragedy. Cause if this doesn't qualify as tragedy, I really don't know what does.
Maybe you could mention a song somewhere in the beginning to listen to. I have listened to this song throughout reading, and I find it fits. It's A river flows in You, by Yiruma.
Congrats for the great story. Although, next time, warn us. Until the very end, I was expecting some miraculous recovery (okay, at the end of the 6th chapter, I grew very afraid, cause one chapter isn't enough to make a recovery... BUT I WAS HOPING!!)
Darn. My eyes sting.
Great job.
MikoKriszty
2008-02-14
ch 6,
abuseYou kill Sasuke and I'll never forgive you.
MikoKriszty
2008-02-14
ch 5,
abusePlease, please make Sasuke okay. He HAS to be able to continue his ninja career. Without that, he's not Sasuke!!
MikoKriszty
2008-02-14
ch 4,
abuseWow. Naruto became quite bold. :P
I'm glad they confessed. Now, the only thing left to do is for Sasuke to get better. ^.^
MikoKriszty
2008-02-14
ch 3,
abuseWas the seizure a coincidence, or was it caused by Naruto wanting to leave...?
WOW. I'm so freaked out. What will happen to Sasuke?? He WILL get better, right?
MikoKriszty
2008-02-13
ch 2,
abusePoor Naruto... I would definitely not sleep any during days like these; I'd die with worry, shame, embarrassment... But mostly worry. I hope Sasuke will be able to continue his ninja life!
MikoKriszty
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseWOW. There are waay too little amount of nonAU fics that are NaruSasu or SasuNaru. I'm glad I finally found one. And an original one at that! Good plot.
BrokenxXxAngel
2008-01-31
ch 7,
abuseOkay, I'm seriously crying right now. I'm not kidding. That had to be...one of the most depressing death-fics I've ever read. Trust me, if it's enough to make me cry, it's a pretty damn good fan-fiction. Well done...it a sad, angst-ish sort of way.

Actually, a friend of mine has seizures basically everyday. He's mentally retarded, autistic, and has tuber sclerosis. I've experienced him having a seizure when I was alone, and it scared the hell out of me. But I'll tell you, you're description of Sasuke's episodes are very accurate that it's scary. I'm probably going to dream about this tonight or something. Gawd! >3
Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitt...
2007-12-27
ch 7,
abuseWhy do you do so many death fics? I mean this would have been good, I mean it was good, until Sasuke died!
MuppyPuppy
2007-12-20
ch 7,
abusei started crying at the end, that's so sad...
lotus-bugxm9
2007-12-04
ch 1,
abuseAww!..damn my eyes are burning from all the ::crying::!! no why
Sasuke!!?? i luv him so much, curses!!:( But hey it was a really
good story very sad though but hella good!:D
DarkMiko13
2007-12-03
ch 7,
abusethat was so sad!! i can't believe sasuke died!! well actually i kinda do with the amount of seizures he had its no surprise. i really was thinkin though that u could've dragged the story on a bit. it looked kinda rushed
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