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| WayToTheDawn9428 2008-07-27 ch 7, | abuseT_T That was the saddest thing ever. Thank you for being realistic and killing him. I hate it when people don't kill off people who are going to die just for a happy ending. |
| neko-jin72 2008-05-22 ch 7, | abuse"Just to visit an old friend."--you made me cry with that last sentence! even though it was sad, it was really good! man, seriously, that was really really good. |
| Tenshi no Yoko 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseDon't mind me, I'm just a little review... xD (Puppy dog eyes) I whisper in your ear The words you want to hear You feel the wind and it reminds you It happens everytime You stop and close your eyes You can't deny what lives inside you Well I know it's hard to see What is meant to be When yesterday is so far behind you Deep inside your soul knows I'm always there You made me believe the day you surrender to me The memory will never die The love that you gave I'll never throw it away The memory will never die The tides take a turn Another lesson learned I'm right here but still you wonder Would you say that you need more And it's not what it was before It was before your on your own and going under Deep inside your soul knows I'm always there You made me believe the day you surrender to me The memory will never die The love that you gave I'll never throw it away The memory will never die Whenever you wake up Whenever you gave up All that you had for nothing at all The bed that you lay in Remember you made it And nobody's there to catch you when you fall You made me believe the day you surrender to me The memory will never die The love that you gave I'll never throw it away The memory will never die You made me believe the day you surrender to me The memory will never die The love that you gave I'll never throw it away The memory will never die |
| MikoKriszty 2008-02-14 ch 7, | abuseOh no. I'm all teary. There are only a handful of fics that made me teary... And this is one of them. You should warn us. I can't stand sad ending. No doubt, this story was beautiful, and worth reading, but at the same time, it was so sad... You should change the genre to tragedy. Cause if this doesn't qualify as tragedy, I really don't know what does. Maybe you could mention a song somewhere in the beginning to listen to. I have listened to this song throughout reading, and I find it fits. It's A river flows in You, by Yiruma. Congrats for the great story. Although, next time, warn us. Until the very end, I was expecting some miraculous recovery (okay, at the end of the 6th chapter, I grew very afraid, cause one chapter isn't enough to make a recovery... BUT I WAS HOPING!!) Darn. My eyes sting. Great job. |
| MikoKriszty 2008-02-14 ch 6, | abuseYou kill Sasuke and I'll never forgive you. |
| MikoKriszty 2008-02-14 ch 5, | abusePlease, please make Sasuke okay. He HAS to be able to continue his ninja career. Without that, he's not Sasuke!! |
| MikoKriszty 2008-02-14 ch 4, | abuseWow. Naruto became quite bold. :P I'm glad they confessed. Now, the only thing left to do is for Sasuke to get better. ^.^ |
| MikoKriszty 2008-02-14 ch 3, | abuseWas the seizure a coincidence, or was it caused by Naruto wanting to leave...? WOW. I'm so freaked out. What will happen to Sasuke?? He WILL get better, right? |
| MikoKriszty 2008-02-13 ch 2, | abusePoor Naruto... I would definitely not sleep any during days like these; I'd die with worry, shame, embarrassment... But mostly worry. I hope Sasuke will be able to continue his ninja life! |
| MikoKriszty 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseWOW. There are waay too little amount of nonAU fics that are NaruSasu or SasuNaru. I'm glad I finally found one. And an original one at that! Good plot. |
| BrokenxXxAngel 2008-01-31 ch 7, | abuseOkay, I'm seriously crying right now. I'm not kidding. That had to be...one of the most depressing death-fics I've ever read. Trust me, if it's enough to make me cry, it's a pretty damn good fan-fiction. Well done...it a sad, angst-ish sort of way. Actually, a friend of mine has seizures basically everyday. He's mentally retarded, autistic, and has tuber sclerosis. I've experienced him having a seizure when I was alone, and it scared the hell out of me. But I'll tell you, you're description of Sasuke's episodes are very accurate that it's scary. I'm probably going to dream about this tonight or something. Gawd! >3 |
| Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitt... 2007-12-27 ch 7, | abuseWhy do you do so many death fics? I mean this would have been good, I mean it was good, until Sasuke died! |
| MuppyPuppy 2007-12-20 ch 7, | abusei started crying at the end, that's so sad... |
| lotus-bugxm9 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseAww!..damn my eyes are burning from all the ::crying::!! no why Sasuke!!?? i luv him so much, curses!!:( But hey it was a really good story very sad though but hella good!:D |
| DarkMiko13 2007-12-03 ch 7, | abusethat was so sad!! i can't believe sasuke died!! well actually i kinda do with the amount of seizures he had its no surprise. i really was thinkin though that u could've dragged the story on a bit. it looked kinda rushed |