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| the reason you miss me 2008-09-24 ch 1, | abusethis made PERFECT sense and it was wonderful. loved it L-O-V- E-D. |
| sweet pandamonium 2008-08-26 ch 1, | abusethe ending is so powerful and omg o.o I love this, so sad, so true to how she would really feel I think. like the unrequited misalight hints. amazing job. write more misal |
| AnAngelUnableToLove 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. I didn't understand what was happening until the last line. It's pretty deep. Painful to read. |
| Enmei 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written. I love Death Note in the fact that it's impossible for me to actually dislike any one character and Misa was a character that I quickly dismissed as the usual, attention-grabbing Sue that tends to ruin a series. She didn't. And I think you've captured her character well and provided a very believable and even probable one-shot in description to what she may've been thinking as her last stand in the final episode. Cheers, and this is very good work. |
| That Crazy Girl 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. The way that Misa is both repulsed and yet strangely fascinated with L is amazing. Good job! :D |
| Crimson Masquerade 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseYay for MisaxL luff! :D I despise Light and so love reading fics like this, because darling L deserves more love...T_T |
| Coco-Minu 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abusePoor Misa. This made me feel quite sad...very well written. |
| Danny Barefoot 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseNice stuff, some real tension and uncertainty in there. |
| devoted2inuyasha 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. This was wonderful. I especially liked the ending, very unexpected (for me, at least). |
| Fledgling 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseOh. Absolutely beautiful. I like the LMisa pairing because I think it allows for a different, and edgy exploration of the two personalities. Of the many that I've read, only a few have caught my eye-- usually they're too sappy, or too OOC, or simply improbable because no way, L and Misa would never find themselves in THAT kind of situation. But there's just something about this fic that really stood out at me. First of all, I commend you on Misa's voice in this fic. It stands out well, and paints a really clear, direct picture in my mind. Secondly, I like how you give Misa depth by including shades of emotion, not only one. Some writers oversimplify the depth of Misa's obsession with Light once they put Misa and L together, but handled the balance wonderfully. As well, the progression of the story, and general descriptions of L, were very well done. Great story! This is definitely up there on my list of well-liked LMisa fics. Keep writing! |
| K-girl 2007-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...and this was spur-of-the-moment? It's wonderful! |
| Dark Hope Assassin 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseWow, a marvelous piece. I love the L/Misa-ness of it, especially how believable you've made it. I love that very much. And I quite love that your style didn't leave behind any mistakes of any kind. I adore that--shows that you gave the fic a look before posting it, something not everyone does. I love the Misa-Misa-ness of the narrative as well. It sounds just like her to think the things the way you've described them in this fic. I love it! You're a great author and I'll be keeping a close eye on you for more L/Misa stories, because this pairing could certainly use some loving. ^_^ And you are definitely one of the people who could give those two some high quality love in ideas-wise and writing-wise. ^_^ |
| ice illuser 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuse...that was really sad...but really good. |
| Fugitive 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseThe end got me. It sounds like Misa, too. She thinks so immaturely, lol. I like this. |
| Alisha 2007-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job! You got Misa Ic : ) I can easily seeing her thinking this way! Nicely written. |