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| Mcfergeson 2008-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseI loved this. It was very compassionate and lovingly told. The details were also very well done. Great job! |
| gammara 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet story! I enjoyed it - thank you. |
| asearcher 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseLovely story. I agree...it's Priceless. |
| cardassiana 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseit's so sweet , i hope to read a sequel |
| Plain White T 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet. Is there a sequal? |
| Bineshii 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat an inventive idea! Children for Jon and T'Pol. That makes it tear at your heart to think it might end the same way the episode did. But to restore the timeline again through curing Jon Archer of those parasites, where the billions on earth do not die...a needs of the many situation as the Vulcans would say. But this is a very nice alternate situation and human kind could go on to become billins again from these hardy survivors. |
| dennisud 2007-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh, what could have been! At least a better ending than the series IMHO! dennisud |
| SCLittle 2007-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, how sweet. But please don't stop with this chapter. -Little out |
| Ladyhawke Legend 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was a really sweet story. I liked how you portrayed Archer with kids. I like how you took the ideas from Twilight and expanded them. It was very nicely done. I would encourage you to add more to the story. :) |
| JackSam 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseGood start. Add more soon. |