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Whirlwind421
2008-05-25
ch 11,
abuseAwesome! I love it!! I really like Jason and Lydia! Cute future couple!! *cute puppy dog eyes* They seem to be the most reasonable and sane. I would really like to know more about Jason. Great story!
gibblesgal
2008-05-24
ch 11,
abuseIt seems that some of the crew are feeling the strain a lot more than the others are. Or is there something on the planet that is affecting them? It would be nice if someone stayed sane.
gibblesgal
2008-05-24
ch 10,
abuseHonestly, I hadn't read ahead. Nice "put on notice" speech.
gibblesgal
2008-05-24
ch 9,
abuseSomebody has some explaining to do. For some unknown reason, I don't think shooting your own people is acceptable. This should be interesting.
gibblesgal
2008-05-24
ch 8,
abuseThings are getting just a little bit dicey. Moving along.
Padme4000
2008-05-15
ch 11,
abusethat was a great chapter
Padme4000
2008-05-15
ch 10,
abuseit was a really great chapter
SpaceMonkey0941
2008-05-14
ch 11,
abuseAw, poor Lydia! It's like herding cats. Smart, childish, paranoid-delusional, cats. With guns.
nwfairy
2008-05-13
ch 11,
abuseI was wondering when this was going to get updated ^^
Cody Smith
2008-05-13
ch 11,
abuseHey, great story, can't wait to see what happened to the city, keep up the good work.
Padme4000
2008-03-31
ch 7,
abuseokay i just read it on techiedom and then remembered it being on here so i thought i would leave a review.

It is fantastic.
Darkwing333
2007-12-05
ch 7,
abuseOMG! This story is so good. You had me laughing so much. Every time you write a story, you get better and better at writting! Plus you must have one hell of an imagination! I can't wait for more!
gibblesgal
2007-11-28
ch 7,
abuseThat's it. Call the unknown, but bearlike type of creature names to get its attention. Ugly-the-Pooh! ROTFL She may have solved one problem, but created another that nearly cost her life. At least Liana was quick thinking enough to provide the proper assistance, which I 'think' might help them both in the long run. Drama and action, all rolled into one.

Is it possible that the planet is having an impact on their thinking?
gibblesgal
2007-11-28
ch 6,
abuseI sure hope they don't have to vote on how to proceed in an emergency. Doubt makes for dead people.

Honestly, I hadn't read ahead when I spoke about pairing off to repopulate the Earth DNA, as you put it. LOL

I look forward to wherever you plan to take this story.
gibblesgal
2007-11-28
ch 5,
abuseWhat is this, "The Dating Game" of the Pegasus Galaxy? Survival first, romance and what follows thereafter.

I think I like the attitude of Harris. Don't let anything bother you until you don't have a choice.
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