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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the reference to the Mulder and Scully kiss and the Ross and Rachel kiss. |
| Drakkenfyre 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was so good. It had two great POVs: Hodges and Brass. I was so happy to finally see what wasn't done on the show--and honest emotional reaction from Grissom. I wasn't asking for melodrama; I wanted something like this. I also wanted him to go after her. But taking relationship advice from Hodges . . . heh. But back to your story: I had a little bit of trouble with the change in POV and the flashback bit, but I think just putting in an extra line of space when the big POV change happened would have helped me. I loved the touch about the Golden Tee (maybe a little). And the bit about closing one eye to focus better when texting. And just drunk texting. I also loved the joking about the color, size, and circumference of the night light. All great touches. |
| apgov1 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseThanks for a great story. Chapter 2 please Soon |
| Elialys 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseThis story was truly awesome. The choice of POVs was amazing, original and refreshing. And of course, it made my heart ache :'( Thanks so much for sharing!! *Elialys* |
| dirtylabrat 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseAw! *sniffle* Brass simply rocks. Gosh, I want him to adopt me! Come home Sara, we miss you! :( |
| csijones 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseReally good one shot,even though i dont like Ronnie you work her in well.It also made me feel sorry for Grissom so much that i actually feel like im gonna cry.But still a very good story |