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Missy-Dedocakes
2008-01-09 . chapter 10
Oh Aerrow+Lypix! :) I love it!

“A, dudes, we have a problem”- lolz Finn! Yay you updated! :D Happiness monkeys!! (randomness)
Missy-Dedocakes
2007-12-17 . chapter 9
I don't mind you using Rondana and Pathologica and Ashelle and maybe even Kellesey for the Dome story, they're coming up with the same idea in the arena. And I'm guessing the sinister voice is Ka? I wanna see Kas first appearance- well great chapter! Piper going off with all the crystals, silly Piper, I love it! Glad you updated!
Missy-Dedocakes
2007-12-07 . chapter 8
Short chapter, but still good. Dark Ace has been rejected! LOL... :)

Finn rocks, did I mention that? I probably did... hmm...

Please update! I am loving this story! :)
Missy-Dedocakes
2007-12-04 . chapter 7
Why do they have to destroy the wisdom crystal... is it like the oracle crystal in the sense that people could find it and abuse its power... wow :)

Keep updating! This is a great story! :)
Missy-Dedocakes
2007-12-01 . chapter 6
I get a dedidcated chapter? Cool... and I'll advertise your story on my profile, people read the stories that go up there. I really like the language thing you use in the stories, mine is based partially on latin so yeah -sigh- I like updates! SUGAR! (yes I am geting on a sugar high here)

Also.. so Lypix is a queen, and the Dark Ace wanted to get a wisdom crystal... is that any similer to the oracle crystal from the forbidden city episode? That is cool, keep updating! SUGAR! (LOL :)
Missy-Dedocakes
2007-11-29 . chapter 5
Again, good coffee... hidden memories... You have a good plot going on here... :)
Missy-Dedocakes
2007-11-29 . chapter 4
Coffee rocks.

Poor Lypix, I would think it torture to find everyone I loved sort of suspended in time but have changed anyway, that would be terrifying... I hope she feels better. I give to her my condolences
Missy-Dedocakes
2007-11-26 . chapter 2
LOL, I'm such an idiot. Okay now I get it. You aren't a bad writer, I skimmed chapter three cuz I was in a hurry for something... never mind my monologue :) Anyway so the Dark Ace is her fiance, and so then the Dark Ace tried to drown her and Aerrow almost drowned. I still don't know who Midnight is though. But great story anyway, keep updating! :) I like Terra Krysita, tis' awesome. So is the story, and Lypix... -yeah- well thanks for updating and reading my reviews :)
Missy-Dedocakes
2007-11-26 . chapter 3
So Lypix is on Krysita, but why is the Dark ace there? And who is Midnight? I'm sorry about that, its probably on another one of your stories, but I'm on a tight timeframe so I can only read the chapters really fast, and I miss things... I'm just wondering. I like the plot, though. And a lot of creative stuff with Krysita! Keep updating, really like this story! :)
Missy-Dedocakes
2007-11-25 . chapter 1
So its almost as if Lypix has a split personality- I like that. I can tell a lot of creativity went into this chapter.

:)
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