Reviews for shattered mirrors

Reviews For: shattered mirrors

sonata hirano 2008-07-19 ch 2,	abusei love your story, cant wait for the update
sukai kitsune 2008-03-08 ch 2,	abuseAre you kidding me not good! That was awesome my favorite!
neko-jin72 2008-02-11 ch 2,	abusei love this story so far!! Plz update as soon as you can! i will be looking forward to many chapters as good as these two and i know that you will not disappoint!!
cowcanfly 2007-12-04 ch 3,	abuseat 1st i thought it was taking up space... but then again it must go with the story but hey! lol wonder whats gonna happen soon
ciddy cat 2007-12-04 ch 3,	abusethis just sucks..
Gaaras-Alice 2007-12-04 ch 2, anon.	abuseI love this story, I'm just too damn lazy to actually log on. :P I want to see more interaction between Tala and Rei. They need to sing together too.
cowcanfly 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseawesome story! keep the chapters coming!
Serlene 2007-12-02 ch 2,	abuseHmm... I liked the first chapter better than the second I'm sorry to say. All these song lyrics unfortunately makes it seem like you're just trying to fill in a very thin chapter. plus, I'm really confused. what happend between chapter one and two? how much time has passed, and what's going on?? I'd really like to be able to say that I liked it, but... well, the first chapter was good. A little rushed, but okay, the second chapter... not so much. Sorry... But think that it could be great, just try and look over a few things first. Us readers don't know what's going on inside your head, and we can't really guess it all. You're telling us a story, and I think you need to look over a few things first. Also, if you put in song lyrics that aren't yours... you need a disclaimer in the beginning. /Serlene
no name to hate- sorry 2007-12-02 ch 2, anon.	abuseyou know its a really bad idea to fill a story with songs. for one thing... its illegal. you need a disclaimer. and for another thing, it really ruins the story. because the story is about the characters, and the lives of the characters and maybe the songs somehow influence the characters, i dont know, but its still a bad idea. just some friendly advice. dont make a story boring. its like you're running out of a story plot and trying to fill up the spaces with songs... as far as i can gather, this story is about Rei and Tala, but so far, and you're on chapter 2, there's been NONE of Rei and Tala action. you reffed action, but its not what we really want to read about. we're fans. we want to be THERE with the characters while they're making out. we want to feel the lust, and envision the scene while we're reading the scene. understand? i will read the next chapter (although by now you probably hate my guts), i just hope its decent enough and worth opening. ps: i really like your song! you got skill. email me with backfire if you want. ;)
riana rox 2007-12-01 ch 2,	abuseabsolutel ADORE the story, LOVE the chapter, and hope you'll continue soon enough
not the usual baka 2007-11-27 ch 1,	abuseI think the idea of the story is great, but getting rid of some of the spelling mistakes you have in this chapter will help. And is 'mirrios' actually a word? Or were you trying to spell mirrors?
IqVaDa 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abusei love it plz update soon! btw i love the pairings especially BRYxKAI so plz add some more BRYxKAI fluff in the fic ^^
riana rox 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abuseya seriously hav 2 update.

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