 mazuac 2008-07-04 . chapter 1That... was... awesome :O WOO! I loved that XD Right more, please? PLEASE!? |
 Sakura cc 2008-01-09 . chapter 1aww cute! Lovely pairing, and a teasing Heather! Uh actions do count mroe than words ^^
JA NE |
 Shrilanka-San 2007-11-30 . chapter 1Yoha! I've been out for awhile, but I'm back!
OMG now I want to play Soapscrubber even more! BWA!
Still, this is very, very cute! I like the fact that any man who tries to seduce Heather ends up a little short on cash, hahahahahaha. And Nephenee's just too sweet :)
Still, great job! Good to see you back in business~! |
 weighed and measured 2007-11-30 . chapter 1Aww, Heather! I like her already, and I haven't even played the game yet. (a lesbian who likes pretty girls? I like her already! I bet she's a secret pervert!)
As I mentioned, I can't comment on characterization as I, uh, haven't yet played the game, but I think this is quite cute ♥ |
 Nico-Chan 2007-11-29 . chapter 1Wow, most excellent! This pairing is growing on me quickly, and as the first fic with them I've read you've certainly delighted me. Nephenee is always fun to see, and I like how apparent it is Heather spends time with her. I also love when Heather gives the gift, it's wonderfully in character with her teasing ways.
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 Ryuuseikan 2007-11-26 . chapter 1 Aw, how sweet! Heather/Nephenee is totally going to be the new Raven/Lucius. Keep up the good work! |
 LittleLinor 2007-11-25 . chapter 1... cute! :D
*is annoyed she hasn't played the game now*
I want that game> |
 Roxius 2007-11-25 . chapter 1Awesome and Cute! |
 Mini Nephthys 2007-11-24 . chapter 1Aw. Brain has melted from cute. |