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Reviews For: Drawing Straight Lines

meenist
2008-06-18
ch 1,
abusethank you for this one
Yutaan
2008-02-05
ch 1,
abuseLovely, lovely, so lovely.
The language itself was pretty, simple but descriptive, and as an art student it was fun to read a fic where the author actually knows anything about art. ^^ The characterization was wonderful as well - you always seem to get the hard characters like Soubi and Seimei down exactly right.
Thank you very much for writing such an enjoyable fic. :)
-Yutaan
Teka Lynn
2007-12-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou capture Soubi between worlds so well here. Every detail and word placement is perfect.
ylib
2007-11-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseInteresting character study. I have to ask if you study art. You know a lot a particulars. If not, good researching.

I like character studies, but I personally prefer stories with a stronger plot. Have you thought about doing more with making a new environment or threat?
Vicious Cabaret
2007-11-26
ch 1,
abuseNice story! Can't get enough of those submissive!Soubi and bastard!Seimei fics!

Loved the way you wrote Soubi's POV throughout the story as well - very much in-character.
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