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| meenist 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abusethank you for this one |
| Yutaan 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseLovely, lovely, so lovely. The language itself was pretty, simple but descriptive, and as an art student it was fun to read a fic where the author actually knows anything about art. ^^ The characterization was wonderful as well - you always seem to get the hard characters like Soubi and Seimei down exactly right. Thank you very much for writing such an enjoyable fic. :) -Yutaan |
| Teka Lynn 2007-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou capture Soubi between worlds so well here. Every detail and word placement is perfect. |
| ylib 2007-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting character study. I have to ask if you study art. You know a lot a particulars. If not, good researching. I like character studies, but I personally prefer stories with a stronger plot. Have you thought about doing more with making a new environment or threat? |
| Vicious Cabaret 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseNice story! Can't get enough of those submissive!Soubi and bastard!Seimei fics! Loved the way you wrote Soubi's POV throughout the story as well - very much in-character. |