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Reviews for: Drawing Straight Lines
Moth Gypsy
2009-10-20 . chapter 1
Its absurd, but still very Seimei like, to consider something as miniscule as a paint smear on fingers to be "casual filth." And Im pretty sure this is the first fiction Ive ever read for Loveless, I just couldnt resist c:
meenist
2008-06-18 . chapter 1
thank you for this one
Yutaan
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
The language itself was pretty, simple but descriptive, and as an art student it was fun to read a fic where the author actually knows anything about art. ^^ The characterization was wonderful as well - you always seem to get the hard characters like Soubi and Seimei down exactly right.
Thank you very much for writing such an enjoyable fic. :)
-Yutaan
Teka Lynn
2007-12-09 . chapter 1
You capture Soubi between worlds so well here. Every detail and word placement is perfect.
ylib
2007-11-29 . chapter 1
Interesting character study. I have to ask if you study art. You know a lot a particulars. If not, good researching.

I like character studies, but I personally prefer stories with a stronger plot. Have you thought about doing more with making a new environment or threat?
Vicious Cabaret
2007-11-26 . chapter 1
Nice story! Can't get enough of those submissive!Soubi and bastard!Seimei fics!

Loved the way you wrote Soubi's POV throughout the story as well - very much in-character.
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