 Moth Gypsy 2009-10-20 . chapter 1Its absurd, but still very Seimei like, to consider something as miniscule as a paint smear on fingers to be "casual filth." And Im pretty sure this is the first fiction Ive ever read for Loveless, I just couldnt resist c: |
 meenist 2008-06-18 . chapter 1thank you for this one |
 Yutaan 2008-02-05 . chapter 1Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
The language itself was pretty, simple but descriptive, and as an art student it was fun to read a fic where the author actually knows anything about art. ^^ The characterization was wonderful as well - you always seem to get the hard characters like Soubi and Seimei down exactly right.
Thank you very much for writing such an enjoyable fic. :)
-Yutaan |
 Teka Lynn 2007-12-09 . chapter 1 You capture Soubi between worlds so well here. Every detail and word placement is perfect. |
 ylib 2007-11-29 . chapter 1 Interesting character study. I have to ask if you study art. You know a lot a particulars. If not, good researching.
I like character studies, but I personally prefer stories with a stronger plot. Have you thought about doing more with making a new environment or threat? |
 Vicious Cabaret 2007-11-26 . chapter 1Nice story! Can't get enough of those submissive!Soubi and bastard!Seimei fics!
Loved the way you wrote Soubi's POV throughout the story as well - very much in-character. |