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pruethesoldier
2008-04-27
ch 14,
abuseoh please update soon. i would love to see what happens next
alboppy
2008-01-31
ch 14,
abusegreat chapter
I like the interesting twist about Cole knowing he was trying to get her pregnant
GoldxxSunlight
2008-01-30
ch 14,
abuseah its sO SAD poor phoebe I want to read really soon
PhoebeColefan
2008-01-30
ch 14,
abuseGreat chap! Can't wait to see what happens next!
PhoebeColefan
2008-01-30
ch 13,
abuseNice chap, continue soon!
GoldxxSunlight
2008-01-29
ch 13,
abuseiVE ALWAYS WANTED TO HAVE MY WEDDING ON NEW YEARS AT MIDNIGHT I LOVED IT PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON
alboppy
2008-01-23
ch 12,
abuseInteresting story - if the twins are 2 years old, I would think that Emily would have been able to say something to alert her parents earlier
GoldxxSunlight
2008-01-22
ch 12,
abuseI loved it plz plz plz plz plz plz lpz plz update really really really son!
PhoebeColefan
2008-01-20
ch 10,
abuseHey I really liked this chap! Please continue and let Cole and Phoebe go somewhere alone at the weekend without anything goes wrong! Thanks
alboppy
2008-01-20
ch 10,
abuseWow - two years and they still aren't married
cherrylilly
2008-01-16
ch 1,
abuseI know that not a lot of people are reviewing at the moment,
but don't get discouraged:)
I think that your story is developing great.
I liked this chapter a lot and I can't wait for more:)
PhoebeColefan
2008-01-15
ch 8,
abuseI liked a lot that chap!! Continue soon as you do! Make the scenes with Cole training Phoebe funny!!
alboppy
2008-01-15
ch 8,
abuseI am not usually into teen Charmed however you have brought something that others have missed - that Cole was out to kill the Charmed ones in your story - similar to the show but different. There are some minor errors with grammar but it has not affected my ability to read.

I will look forward to reading more
mystical lady of diamonds
2008-01-14
ch 8,
abuseI love the name emily it's cute. I an't wait to see how cole is going to train pheobe.
ChArMeDlOvEr4LiFe
2008-01-13
ch 6,
abuseHe should keep his powers!
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