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Snickers and Birdly
2009-07-21 . chapter 5
PER FAVORE AGGIORNI!! IO AMO QUESTO MA IO PENSO ATTI DI BUMLETS COME UNA CAGNA CORNEA. MI PIACE. TENGA SU L'ECCELLENZA! BASICALLY UPDATE
CIAO,
BIRDLY
tree leaves
2008-09-27 . chapter 5
honesly, whered u go, and come back cause, and i think i speak for everyone here, we miss u and ur wonderful writing abilities
PolkadotSunstar
2008-04-12 . chapter 5
Aw, Snitch has the same birthday as me, lol. He and Skittery are cutee. (:

Ah, yay! Spot and Race. (:

I'm looking forward to more, update soon!

-Amy (:
Girlwithabrokenheart
2008-04-02 . chapter 4
Wow I liked your stroy it's really good and has a cool plot line. Update soon please.
geek'd
2008-03-27 . chapter 4
Well, high school parties, eh?

Let's see, what happened this chapter?
-Jack made out with Spot, again, I guess.
-Jack gave David a blowjob
-Race actually slept in his actual bed
-Sarah screwed Itey
-everyone wonders what the hell they did

Sounds like fun!
PolkadotSunstar
2008-02-22 . chapter 4
I like this so far. I hope you update soon! (=
Miniola
2008-02-21 . chapter 4
Neh...*wants more* Looking forward to see how things progress! I could certainly see a few things being set up in here... it looks good!

Miniola
Zoran
2007-11-28 . chapter 2
Yay ^__^ a new chapter so soon!

aw... that's so mean that they all hate Specs! Why do they anyway?

I can smell far to many secrets between the boys *hehe* ... I like it , keeps it interesting , well done!

Mush and Blink ... what more is there to say? ^__^ I just loved them in this chapter *hehe*

I really can't wait for the next where you will tell us what happend to David.

KEEP IT UP and bring me that drama *wink*
^_^
Miniola
2007-11-26 . chapter 2
Hey,just wanted to let you know that I'm loving this story so far! Can't wait to see where it's headed. Any clues to what exactly happened way back when that nearly got David killed coming up?
Zoran
2007-11-25 . chapter 1
YES! Finally a new slash-chapter fic ^__^

I really like your ... beinning idea? so far. I can't wait to see where this is going.

Already now there are quite a few things I hope you'll explain at one point or another. Like:

1. OMG They almost killed Davey? What happend? Do they feel bad about it (I hope they do!)? Will/did David forgive them? ... hm... maybe it could happen again *happy sigh* drama drama

2. Is there going to be some serious talking and fluff in this story too, or is it just "fun-like" ( I have to admit I am a sucker for drama and fluff *hehe*)

3. Uh uh Drugs huh? I hope they won't ruin so much. I read some drug stroies and theey all ended sad (well almost all) I hate sad endings! :(

3. So... did David turn into a hottie and is now gonna play with a certain newsies -caugh-Jack-caugh- mind? (or someone elses if you must) ... hey maybe David turns out to be an awesome singer ... ( gosh I really want to know what will happen!)

4. Do they all get along well? (because it sure doesn't sound like it)

5. Did I get it right that the current pairs are : Blink/Mush , Skittery/Snitch, Dutchy/Specs , (Race/Spot?)

6. There are a few more that I forgot at the moment *blush* sorry

I really like it so far and I hope you won't keep me waiting too long *glare* , *hehe*

Nice start! KEEP IT UP AND HURRY! ^__^
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