Great story! Love the ending! :)

hey great story.

Well, that explains that, don't it?

Well-written chapter. Like this very much!

Are you *sure* Doc doesn't remember the Libyans? LOL You could make a sequel out of this you know.

A bit anticlimactic ending, even though that's what would probably happen. It's as close as you can get without taking into account the grandfather paradox. Since Doc was never shot, they wouldn't have gone back, so any changes purposely made would be undone. Which means he would have been shot which means they would have gone back, which means he wouldn't have been shot, so they wouldn't have gone back, and so forth. Argh, time travel gives me a headache. And yet, I love time travel movies. Anyway, good job.

Nice writing here, but what happens? Where does Marty and the two kids go? Do they go back in time to save Doc and his wife? Or do they realize before it's too late that just before they hit 88 mph that Verne accidentally set your "location coordinates" at the bottom of the ocean? Or a city that does not exist in the future to which they were headed? I like that location coordinate idea, really cool.

Ok, after what has been happening in America, I'd thought I'd put my foot down.

Because of the terrorist attack in America, and because this story has got to do with terrorists, no more chapters will be put up until the madness is calmed down a bit. Sorry, but I don't want to offend any body. I'm not saying that it will never be updated, but now is not the time. There are some things more important than BTTF at the moment.

Your friend in time,

Frank Candiloro AKA frankie_j12000

Cant wait to see next chapter. Back to the future is one of my favorite movie series.

Sorry for the lack of updating chapters, I've been busy lately, I'm still writing chapter 3.

plese it contiue it so good

Great story!

Cool plot so far. Continue.

Cool story, continue it please.

Why won't any one review?