 The Not-So Addict 2009-01-24 . chapter 1Hiya! This is an...interesting story...I never really thought of Linebeck that way, as he's supposed to be a big seafarer person...That bit of french at the end is, slightly random, and kinda put me off, because of the lack of capitals (Shoot me). I also think it ended a bit abruptly. All in all, even though this story was written more than a year ago, I think it's a fairly well written story, with an interesting topic.
~Teehee (The Diabolical Cubis(?) Sisters) |