I loved this chapter. I was listening to a song called "On the wing", and while I read the part where Derek kissed her, the song went, "the weekend we were in love..." I love how life's coincidences make everything a better place to be.

Great storry!

so emily and sam know about their "mysterious world"? WITH THE WHOLE DJ ELBOWS THING AND BABE RAIDER THING? and why was that in caps thwat was not supposed to be in caps haha sorry

i'm going to say that sam and eimly came up with the ingenious idea of telling comatose casey and derek the exact same story of how they realized their feelings for each other and fell in love, there by proving that people in comas can, in fact, hear what people tell them.

that, or they got a semi to slam into their friends car and possibly kill them. yeah...

anyways, i think you wrote a solid story. i got a little worried when you went all dramatic on us and had derek and casey get shot... but you managed to tidy that up by putting them in a coma. which, surprisingly, i actually liked. i mean, normally putting someone in a coma ends up being all overly dramatic and soap opera-esk, but you pulled it off brilliantly.

and i really loved the bit about casey going into derek's room cause niether of them could sleep. really sweet, but not in an overly mushy way. it's like they're so close that they feel weird if they are apart... it makes my heart go all "aw" and sappy shit like that. congrats, not a lot of people can do that ;)

pixie

my god. i just about pissed myself when i went to their myspace. seriously. that's just... freaky. i... i have no idea what to do with it. it just... gah.

but, on the other hand, they do allow sam to look like less of a complete and total doofus. sorry if you're a fan, but, on the show, he looks like a dopey snivling loser to me. in the pictures (minus the slightly ridiculous rap wannabe-ness) he actually didn't look so bad. or young. he lookd like he's about 3 years older on myspace. and his head doesn't look so oddly shapen in most of the pictures. (ps: nice track suit lol ;)

okay, nope still can't get over it. your review is getting taken over by a rap group's songs now. damn, US disney actos would NEVER be allowed to do anything like this. haha their song "shree krishna" sounds kinda like the umpa-lumpa song from charlie and the chocolate factory!

so... onto the actual story review. right. ahem. so the story's awesome, but from the 300+ reviews, i'm guessing you already know that. and i'm also taking a wild guess that you already know that you should be off writing more stories instead of reading this review. so get to it!

pixie

like the set up so far. and if you happen to aquire a copy of that convo, i'd love one too!

aww come on how did sam and emily know? lols and wow this was great, ur a great writer. i cried alot lols. actually when he jumed in fron tof the bullet i was llistening to illbe there for you by bon jovi...so tat was just an emotional moment. but i loved this very much, thanks for writing this

you know the whole coma thing could have sucked -- but you def. made it work! Great story and interesting cliffhanger...

THAT WAS SO VERY IMMENSELY TERRIBLY TERRIFIC! I LOVED IT SOO SOO SOO SOO SOO SOO SO MUCH! I can't believe you left it like that though I wish you would have explained why Emily knew about Casey's nickname for Derek when it was actually in Casey's coma.

It was really cute. I loved it so much. It made me giggle and now I'm off to see if you have anymore fanfictions. Hopefully you do!
Person Of A Strange Origin

Okay now I understand. Sorry for freaking out in my last review. This was really really good. I'm on to the last chapter, well bye
Person Of A Strange Origin

OH MY FUCKING GOD! I AM SO RUDED OUT RIGHT NOW!
How could you do that! How could you make it all a dream or whatever. Seriously. What the heck. Despite the fact I love this story and I'm going to continue reading is despite the point but seriously!
Well I'm off to read the rest
Person Of A Strange Origin

This was a very interesting story and I loved it. Chapter 15 was kind of confusing, but then I thought I figured it out, only now at the very end to wonder how Sam and Emily knew things from the "coma world". In a way, I at first thought that the whole thing that's the "coma world" was the reality and what happened there was the truth, but then when they woke up, Nora and George didn't want to say they were shot (to minimize further trauma or something). But of course that wouldn't make sense since they didn't have any physical damage except for some scratches. Still, to think that Sam and Emily dreamed of the same world as Casey and Derek would be kind of absurd.

Anyhow, I really loved this story and I hope that you'll reply with an explanation you had in mind when you wrote this (if any). Thanks. I hope to hear more from you soon!

i like the humor you used in here.
& the DJ Elbows thing. i remember all those 'sore elbows' posters in his room... & the guy kinda looked like a dj to me, so that's what i thought.
but the ending. omg. ugh! lol. xp
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! tell us what that means?!
my thoughts are that they were talking in their coma & sam & emily came to visit or something.
OR
that since sam & emily are SUCH good friends with them & they know them SO well, that they came up with logical guesses.
BUT
i'm guessing that both of these guesses are wrong anyway. but, oh well. just my input. :]

hahah! i just finished reading this.

the ending LOL.. all i could say is "WHAT!"

lolol.. but I loved this story. great job. *saves to favorites*

your story's amazing, but oh, come ON. you CAN'T leave us hanging like that. at least give an explaination! unless you don't know either, and you're just putting it there to, i don't know, have an ending? DO, DO TELL! PLEASE!

how can you leave it like that.
i officailly wont be able to sleep tonite.great.

no clue what reasoning there could be behind that!
help


btw..good story...

:)

-meka