Aww you never finsihed this!

God that was depressing. Extremely well written and I actually like the theory of Adam being Claire's father too. Still the mere thought of going through what she did is terrifying, having it described in detail leaves one quite cold inside. Poor, poor girl!

omg! that was really good! wonderful job!

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Wow. Really intriguing, really excellent.

I painfully loved every time they set CLaire aside and what a wonderful ending.

My favorite line: the men set out to save the cheerleader, using the world as an excuse.

Waiting for more

it's creepily good. it's creepy because that is an chilling tale, written beautifully in a way that many authors don't attempt because most times it leads to failure and the message gets left behind. However you wrote it so it did work. You didn't lose the message, which happens more often than not in writing. incredible writing and i hope you continue writing more, in any category.

inspire16

who should be doing some homework