HMM... CHRISTMAS GIFT ART? NEVER HEARD OF IT! I FEEL SO SAD. ;D

Hahaha, I should probably go on deviant art... I checked a couple of seconds ago... 31 messages, and 13 deviations...
But I have to update here, first.

And even though you're positng the more angsty side of Hiei that he got over a while ago, you've got it nailed down to the point. :)

Are you a profesional poet? seems like it. please update

Wow, good poetry.
I haven't seen that in a while. >.>
Hiei seems a little too angsty in this chapter, just a tad too high.
I hope you don't turn out to be a Kuwabara basher... Becuase that would break my heart. Rawr...

not sure why but the rhyming got me in the mood to read it out loud. heck, i thought it was awesomely great! loved hiei's pov. really amazing for him to express all this. i enjoyed the begining very much (something new) and the ending was breahtaking. great job!

:-)

lol. i found it funny that it is like yusuke! great poem!! i look forward to more!

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I like it :) I don't know if it's good as poetry I don't understand poetry. But I simply like the feeling I got from it and I think this describes how it is for him well :)

i absolutely loved the chice of words in it! really beautiful and cute as well! aww, it's so like hiei to think. great job!

:-)

This is an awesome poetry. I like it. Especially the last part, it's kind-a touching.

Le-chan