To put a little humor in there:

From the window:

Riku: Ha take that! Noobs...

Most amazing thing I've read ever. I was close to cryng! Well, sort of.

Aww, Riku, no! I can't believe it... I knew he was going to die since he first asked that question (actually I thought it was going to be suicide, but this death was much calmer than I expected). This is such an amazing story, I like it alot, you can definitely feel the energy and the characters, they all fit together perfectly.

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(cries) That was very well written for your first KH oneshot; very deep and emotional. Riku's my fav character so it was kinda a knife to the chest when Kairi said he was gone. If I had to rate it, it'd be a perfect ten; I can't see a single flaw in this piece, well done.

Anyway, I hope you update Forgiveness soon, I'm on pins and needles waiting!