Omg! This sounds awesome! You should continue this! (if you have already started another story, sorry, haven't checked out the rest of your stories yet...) Anyways great job!

This one-shot is brilliant! I would have loved it even more if you continued! Like making it into a story instead of a one-shot. I bet it would turn out great!

amazing

I don't really know how these work, cause I'm used to Quizilla. But I saw your art on Deviantart (my id is danceintherain3) and this story (I don't know if the messages show which one, so I'll tell you...it was Twilight Possibilities) was awesome. I never thought of something like that happening, and what Mirabella's name means is so cool. I'm definitely going to check out some of your other stuff here.

i suppose there's no hope of you continuing this story? i would have loved to see were it went

I left a comment on your Deviant but I'll leave one here too!! I absolutely love this story and I hope you continue it instead of keeping it a oneshot. It has great potential!

Well, that is very interesting.
I'd love to see a full-blown story of this. It would be fascinating. Whether the love Edward feels is fatherly or attraction it would deal with a lot of conflicting issues.

I really think you're on to something here. You should continue it. I think you should go with your best instincts with how the love should go. But father's eyes don't usually smolder. If you catch my drift. Good luck. Can't wait to read more.

this is a really good short story. that'd be cool if you made it into a longer story! by the way- really clever with the namesake there! i love it!

I really really really liked it alot! maybe you could do a little more but i liked it alot! it would be strange but i would like it alot!

i think it would be cool if edward falls in love with bellas daughter

Aw that was so cute ...
You should make it into a story, not just a oneshot...

Omg, it's so good!
I heart the ending. :)
*sniffle* IT WAS HEARTBREAKING.
Write more of thiss!
Only I don't get exactly where this was set and when it was?
But otherwise it's ah-mazing. :D

xxEmily