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Ladyfingers
2008-08-17 . chapter 4
I. Love. This.
xquisittexabie
2008-07-10 . chapter 4
Loved it, update soon
MadamCalculator
2008-06-03 . chapter 4
Dude Work on your spellin' it's terrible to understand. :( but an ok story. :)
MiniBloodyMurder
2008-04-12 . chapter 4
okay so the only diffrence from robin's past and the allen in DGM 's past is the names right cause i am terribley cunffused on whats their [past] difference
YugiKitten
2008-04-05 . chapter 4
I find your story very interesting, I like it.
Makes me wonder if Komui is going to meet his beloved Rinaly soon XD
Akky-chan
2008-03-28 . chapter 4
8D i was wondering if you'd post again! (sorry, you probubly dont know me, i began reading your fics a few months ago, so you hadnt appeared in a while)

Komui and Cross's conversation turned out well ^^
seasnake.756
2008-03-28 . chapter 4
that was the longest walk I've read ever... good
Vuti-Chan
2008-03-28 . chapter 4
Good chapter, but there was some errors.
“See, I tolled you it won’t be that bad.”
Should be "See, I told you.." There was some others as well but I'm too lazy to search them.

But those small errors don't matter, 'cause ths fiction is awesome. n_n Keep up the good work.
zenbon zakura
2008-03-27 . chapter 4
hurry and update slowpoge!
Bakachan15
2008-03-27 . chapter 4
Yeah! Finished reading it so far and loved it. PLEASE update soon!
FireNose
2008-03-27 . chapter 4
ahaha! Kanda's too busy wailing on Lavi to notice pretty little robin! Lavi's gonna steal her from 'im! poor lenalee, being traumatized all the time! meh, I never liked Lenalee anyways...
Updating is like a cookie! everyone loves them, and you can't get enough until there's no more left in the jar! some times you take one, and some times you take more, sometimes you sneak them, while others are for special ocasions! I love medafores(did i spell that right?)
Keep Writing!
Jasaiya Hawkins
2008-03-27 . chapter 4
ok, have to say it. it's driving me insane!! you have a lot of spelling errors and a few words are in the wrong tense. other than that, update soon. can't wait to read more.
Kyurengo
2008-03-27 . chapter 3
Hmm, pretty interesting!
I hope that you can update soon ^^
YugiKitten
2008-03-27 . chapter 3
XD poor Robin, I can't wait for the next chapter
seasnake.756
2008-02-06 . chapter 3
love it. there appears to be a big medical problem ahead... and what perverts they were.
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