hey i love your chapter's plaese write alot more

i was crying in this chapter and i didn't even notice till the end of the it! This is the first story that has ever*stresses ever* made me cry! Bravo, i say! Bravo!!^^*wipes tears away*
Ja!!;)

keep up the good work

:O that was so sad a was shedding tears! great story!

hi its me again
well i see you have it in spanish but there are some mistakes in grammar you only use the translator
i know because i read the english version and i velebe i can help in that metter
if u wish im from mexico so i can tell you the stuff you whant to say in spanish

I'm so sorry! I feel like a horrible reviewer! I've been away from my computer for a while and just got back to your story again. Kagome has become quite the **...in a few ways :-) I really like this but I'm wondering how far from the Miko Kagome she will stray?

this is great please keep it up

you did a good job
update, when you can

thanks, your the best.

im totally confuzled but happy you updated even i its chapters from the other one

awesome! yer in saudi arabia?!
I hope you ahve fun and yer trip went well. The story is progressing beautifully :)

Hi Callie-Yue,
Back to my reading ways ;-)
Nice to have a prologue. Don't know if this story has any link with the last one. Seems like it does but I might be wrong. Will start my "criticism" after I read the next chapter or 2.
Hope you're doing well. Will give you a call soon.
Take care,
lol, Missie-Yue (and I do!)

this story is beautiful ... I say it again: your writing style is exquisite and your imagination is wonderful ... words do not do justice to this story

I loved very much the storyline and plot ... this is so different from your other stories I have read that it let me speechless ... so much grief and madness ... so much darkness all around her ... I loved the way you described everything that went inside Kagome and Sesshoumaru ... loved every description of their feelings, all of the characters' feelings

I specifically loved the chapter in which you described the grief of Kagome's mother ... that really made me shed tears ... you did a beautiful job describing it ... I was sorry to find out of your own grief and loss though

|~sayuri~|

my many condolences. I've recently loss someone important in my life too. Once again I hope I haven't been to harsh in my other review but itsjuss doesnt flow the same and kagomes mom seems to care so deeply for her I. Chap 20 n it would b heartbreaking for souta to wittness his beloved sister kill his mother. My heart goes out to u, u r strong to pick up this story so soon I would have been too bitter to continue w/o tainting the story

i really enjoyed your story.there was so much for the reader(me) to feel through reading it.

The song itself makes me cry, but the emotions you put into it made me cry harder. I usually don't like songfics but this chapter was good. Sesshoumaru is a little OOC, but after dealing everything and it's brother, I think he should be. So far this story is excellent, I haven't seen many grammar or spelling errors, like spelling Sesshoumaru, Sesshouamru. Hehe. keep up your writing, you seem to be talented.