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gabby
2009-08-26 . chapter 15
hey i love your chapter's plaese write alot more
XxSpIcYpEpPeRxX
2009-04-07 . chapter 7
i was crying in this chapter and i didn't even notice till the end of the it! This is the first story that has ever*stresses ever* made me cry! Bravo, i say! Bravo!!^^*wipes tears away*
Ja!!;)
darkangel0212
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
keep up the good work
betstar
2008-10-25 . chapter 20
:O that was so sad a was shedding tears! great story!
AKARY YAMI
2008-10-16 . chapter 1
hi its me again
well i see you have it in spanish but there are some mistakes in grammar you only use the translator
i know because i read the english version and i velebe i can help in that metter
if u wish im from mexico so i can tell you the stuff you whant to say in spanish
llebreknit
2008-05-28 . chapter 26
I'm so sorry! I feel like a horrible reviewer! I've been away from my computer for a while and just got back to your story again. Kagome has become quite the **...in a few ways :-) I really like this but I'm wondering how far from the Miko Kagome she will stray?
Sesshomaru2004
2008-05-26 . chapter 26
this is great please keep it up
juusan'ya
2008-05-25 . chapter 26
you did a good job
update, when you can

thanks, your the best.
just-let-me-go
2008-05-24 . chapter 23
im totally confuzled but happy you updated even i its chapters from the other one
FluffyandKagome
2008-05-24 . chapter 26
awesome! yer in saudi arabia?!
I hope you ahve fun and yer trip went well. The story is progressing beautifully :)
Missie-Yue
2008-04-17 . chapter 1
Hi Callie-Yue,
Back to my reading ways ;-)
Nice to have a prologue. Don't know if this story has any link with the last one. Seems like it does but I might be wrong. Will start my "criticism" after I read the next chapter or 2.
Hope you're doing well. Will give you a call soon.
Take care,
lol, Missie-Yue (and I do!)
sayuri-girl
2008-04-16 . chapter 21
this story is beautiful ... I say it again: your writing style is exquisite and your imagination is wonderful ... words do not do justice to this story

I loved very much the storyline and plot ... this is so different from your other stories I have read that it let me speechless ... so much grief and madness ... so much darkness all around her ... I loved the way you described everything that went inside Kagome and Sesshoumaru ... loved every description of their feelings, all of the characters' feelings

I specifically loved the chapter in which you described the grief of Kagome's mother ... that really made me shed tears ... you did a beautiful job describing it ... I was sorry to find out of your own grief and loss though

|~sayuri~|
bxkitten
2008-03-29 . chapter 19
my many condolences. I've recently loss someone important in my life too. Once again I hope I haven't been to harsh in my other review but itsjuss doesnt flow the same and kagomes mom seems to care so deeply for her I. Chap 20 n it would b heartbreaking for souta to wittness his beloved sister kill his mother. My heart goes out to u, u r strong to pick up this story so soon I would have been too bitter to continue w/o tainting the story
JammyDodger217
2008-03-24 . chapter 21
i really enjoyed your story.there was so much for the reader(me) to feel through reading it.
Ayako-sama
2008-03-22 . chapter 7
The song itself makes me cry, but the emotions you put into it made me cry harder. I usually don't like songfics but this chapter was good. Sesshoumaru is a little OOC, but after dealing everything and it's brother, I think he should be. So far this story is excellent, I haven't seen many grammar or spelling errors, like spelling Sesshoumaru, Sesshouamru. Hehe. keep up your writing, you seem to be talented.
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