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anonymous
2008-09-02
ch 10, anon.
abusethis story is really disturbing.
well-written but disturbing nonetheless.
Pen-Name-Kitsune-chan
2008-08-30
ch 34,
abuseluv'd this story!

keep up the good work!
varia
2008-08-29
ch 34, anon.
abuseYAY!
sehne
2008-08-28
ch 34,
abuseAn awesome story! I really liked it. Thank you for sharing this great fic. I thought I was going to spend my summer being bored, but thankfully I find this fic. :)
Varia
2008-08-27
ch 22, anon.
abuseDon't they ever use the bathroom in this story? Just a thought...I was like reading and was like, "When do they go pee?" Heheh...

Great story so far...reading on...
Varia
2008-08-26
ch 11, anon.
abuseHi! It is BabyGirl85 from Hexfiles...when someone mentioned that they read this on I had to come and read it here as it is finished here hehe...

I love this story...so mysterious...so intriguing...*Squeals* LOVE IT!
Leon
2008-08-13
ch 34, anon.
abuseI have been reading this for about four days.

For four days you have have me captivated.
Leon
2008-08-11
ch 15, anon.
abuseI think I know what's going to happen, but at chapter 15, it's such a long way off. I'm still captivated, my eyes hurt from reading so much, and I just want to take the day off tomorrow to read and read, read more and see more. For you have me living this story! It is woven so well!
Leon
2008-08-11
ch 13, anon.
abuseNow, I normally review stories at their end, however this is such a long story, and I wanted to tell you how much I appriciate the weaving, twisting and flowing wave of this story. It is very, very good.

It has shocked me alot that Ron's head has been found. I'm not sure I was prepared for other people to be in the maze, at least as of yet. But it's good, it has me gripped. Well done!
Ansuz
2008-08-08
ch 34,
abuseThis is absolutely gorgeous. Your writing is lush and realistic. It reminds me of Tad Williams' writing style.

I stayed up until 5AM to finish this. That's the sign of a brilliant writer. Well done!
Angel of Lavender
2008-08-04
ch 19,
abuseso..maybe harry is planning on giving up his memories in place of draco's, or his life...but, i can't see him doing that T.T
Angel of Lavender
2008-08-04
ch 18,
abusejeasus, thats just...horrifying. i think this is the worst so far...
Angel of Lavender
2008-08-04
ch 17,
abuseso..amazing.
Angel of Lavender
2008-08-04
ch 16,
abuseHah! so waiting for that, to epicly fail at lip reading.
Angel of Lavender
2008-08-04
ch 15,
abuse"in which case no attraction will be important to you ever again." so..what? is harry planning to sacrifice himself? but then he could never see ron and hermonione again, so its not that. what plan is it? what? what? :3
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