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Reviews For: Exile Vignettes

kosmokomik
2008-03-18
ch 4,
abuseI love this Exile of yours, she doesn't scream Mary-Sue or make me want to gag. (Hell, if she was real, I'd buy her a drink, that's how symphathetic she is to me.)
I really enjoy your potrayal of her relationships, especially Atton. (Thank you for not making him a simpering, love-struck fool. No, really, thank you. My head was beginning to hurt from the crap in this archive.)
Sandra Evans
2007-12-25
ch 5,
abuseOh, goodness! Too funny! Hey, would you mind doing another AttonxExile piece? I absolutely love the relationship that your pair shares, and I'd love to see you continue telling the abbreviated story from Atton's point of view.
Lady Tragic
2007-12-05
ch 4,
abuse*claps happily*

My only real comment is "Yay!" mixed with "With there was more."

On an aside, I can beta for you, if you're interested.

~Tragic
(Ain't I just?)
Lady Tragic
2007-11-28
ch 3,
abuseHah! This is great! The exile dressed as a twi'lek giving Kavar a lapdance... *giggle* My favorite line: "Force, no wonder that merchant looked confused." ^.^ Good stuff. (Dude, her and Zuka? You *have* to bring that one back up...)

~Tragic
(Ain't I just?)
Lady Tragic
2007-11-25
ch 2,
abuse*giggle*

Younger Exile, Revan, and Malak are just all so... cute. It makes me smile.

~Tragic
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