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| kosmokomik 2008-03-18 ch 4, | abuseI love this Exile of yours, she doesn't scream Mary-Sue or make me want to gag. (Hell, if she was real, I'd buy her a drink, that's how symphathetic she is to me.) I really enjoy your potrayal of her relationships, especially Atton. (Thank you for not making him a simpering, love-struck fool. No, really, thank you. My head was beginning to hurt from the crap in this archive.) |
| Sandra Evans 2007-12-25 ch 5, | abuseOh, goodness! Too funny! Hey, would you mind doing another AttonxExile piece? I absolutely love the relationship that your pair shares, and I'd love to see you continue telling the abbreviated story from Atton's point of view. |
| Lady Tragic 2007-12-05 ch 4, | abuse*claps happily* My only real comment is "Yay!" mixed with "With there was more." On an aside, I can beta for you, if you're interested. ~Tragic (Ain't I just?) |
| Lady Tragic 2007-11-28 ch 3, | abuseHah! This is great! The exile dressed as a twi'lek giving Kavar a lapdance... *giggle* My favorite line: "Force, no wonder that merchant looked confused." ^.^ Good stuff. (Dude, her and Zuka? You *have* to bring that one back up...) ~Tragic (Ain't I just?) |
| Lady Tragic 2007-11-25 ch 2, | abuse*giggle* Younger Exile, Revan, and Malak are just all so... cute. It makes me smile. ~Tragic |