 xandra69 2007-12-04 . chapter 1I loved it!
Like always, I was completely fooled by the use of the jagan. I always seem to accept everything at face value... hm...
Anyway, one thing I don't get is what exactly Kazuki is doing while he's under the influence, if you will? I guess I assume he's still going through the motions of the kissing, albeit alone. That's what causes everyone else's reactions, ne?
I thought your details and your adjective use were good, like when you described Kazuki's fidgeting as if he were "a geek on his first date..."
Thanks for the fun read ^^ |