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| Cable Addict 2008-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it! ^_^ |
| dg101 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseLove the chapter-would love to read a sequel.:) |
| Storm 08 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseI like it and would definitely read if you added more but it's your choice. It makes a good stand-alone story too. |
| sarbey 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseLoved it, please write more. |
| ducky72 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseThe letter Ari wrote to Ziva - very touching! Nice story! |
| louise 2007-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease write more.this was excellent and insightful.love gibbs and love to watch others interact with him |
| LuvZandT 2007-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this. I think you could make it into a longer story if you wanted to. Maybe, even make a Gibbs/Ziva pairing. After all, he did come back to help her in Shalom. Whatever you decide, I am sure will turn out great. This story was really well done and I enjoyed the feelings and thoughts of them in the hospital. |