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DarkAngelKisses
2007-12-10
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abuseSlash Gods, the pain of laughter hurts...
*deep breath* Okay, here are meh fav parts:

'Dick and Adrian sat down where Bruce said to but did not dare sit like Roy and Garth, Adrian liked being alive and Dick liked having a boyfriend.' Roy and Garth? They're a couple? And also, who are they? *shot down by Batman fans* Ow!

“Are you sleeping with Dick?” Du-uh. Oh. Was that supposed to be a secret? *curses* But if Adrian is planning an escape, does that mean he is sleeping with Dick? Wait. Oliver is...Adrian's father, right? NO WAIT is Oliver Roy or Garth's father? WHY AM I SO CLUELESS? But hell, the bet thing made me grin.

If you want, you can check out my Tell Me Your Name fic; it's Red/Robin. Anyway, I am so faving this! Red♥Robin
Olivia Tara Parker Roth Log...
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abuseOMGG that was so funny can't wait for you next dickadrian story keep up the good work kk
Wynja
2007-11-27
ch 1,
abuse-lol-
Yup! Inspired! I'm actually writing an X-mas drabble with a similar situation, but it's from the "Terms..." universe so it's Slade and Robin visiting Bruce... slightly more dangerous... ;o)

AH... I WANT to do a pic from these(and Holyfanfictionbatmans's) stories, but I'm having troubble deciding the style! I would love to do them in a cartoony/manga style, but I can't draw manga! Have to practise... ;O)

A boring grammar-note: you often write "was sat"... I THINK it's either just "sat" like: "Robin sat on a chair" OR "was sitting": "Robin was sitting on a chair"... maybe you should ask someone who actually SPEAKS English (since I'm Swedish), but I THINK so... at least "was sat" sounds a bit strange?

Anyway, great fun to read this! Poor boy's... ;o)
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