really good! please continue!

hey this is great! i'd love to see more. is there more? where is it? it's nice to read a non-ian/sara story for a change and i love the background workup on jake-someone about whom we actually know very little. keep it coming.

Hey, neat. Definetely need more Jake stories.

This is probably some of the best Jake fan fic I have ever read. You've managed to explain and explore Jake's character better than the writers ever bothered to. I hope you write more, I would love to see your take on Jake during the other episodes. Thank you for sharing.

Wow I ilove how you added the insight into jake's thought process and why he's want to be sara's partner, but if jake (that jerk) was really good he'd know that the white bulls a(the chauvunistic pigs and creeps) wouldn't accept females

Thanks for a new insight on Jake's motivation. I admit, I hadn't considered that angle before...

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Nice job! It's very well written. You really got into Jake's brain and showed us what he's thinking. Please write more soon.

Do you know how hard it is to find a Jake story, let alone a good one? Great job! Fills in the blanks nicely.

Great start! I like how you wrote Jake better than the show and gave us a better insight into his personality.

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