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| goku90504 2008-07-31 ch 4, | abuseinteresting fic but where did the blood line and such come from? |
| Knives91 2008-07-01 ch 4, | abuseGreat work. Can't wait for an update. |
| upyoursrasengan 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abusei really like this story, it is excellently written, and has a nice and original plot |
| HolyKnight5 2008-05-28 ch 4, | abuseHm...any hope for an update? |
| animekingmike 2008-05-26 ch 4, | abuseokay, when i read a story for the first time, i do my review on the last chapter, but this is just wow, it completely blew me away. the overall quality of this work was just simply austonishing, keep it up man, i loved it. |
| Scyth3 2008-04-22 ch 4, | abuseThis story warrants more than just 41 reviews, mine excluded. I really love the way you wrote this story. Received brutal training for 3 years and still being able to be an optimist. Good thing he did not become another Sasuke. Can't have that now can we. As for his skill level, although he's around Itachi's skill level, you made it believable, with how he trains, as well as his intriguing blood limit. Body mimicry? Don't think i've ever heard of that one before. And i'm definitely amused when it comes to Naruto giving nicknames to those he interacts with. Kakashi the idiot? LOL! Anyways, good story mate. Keep it up and update soon! |
| InARealPickle 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAh! I have stumbled across one of those rare mature works of fanfiction. :) I got the biggest kick out of the line The villagers would say, "It's what's on the inside that counts." How ironic. That's what Naruto would say as well. |
| o.Arcangel.o 2008-03-28 ch 4, | abuseWow, wow, wow. A VERY unique brand of writing. Very refreshing compared to what I've been reading lately. This is one of the best Naruto stories I've read in a while and your wtiting style just adds to the flavor you already present. Love it, keep it up and update soon! |
| Eliar 2008-03-15 ch 4, anon. | abusebeautiful story so far cant wait to see narutos interaction with the rest of the class |
| utoi 2008-03-12 ch 4, | abusebeautifully written. =] |
| Ghost of Perdition 2008-02-29 ch 4, | abuseI really, really like this story so far. I can't even begin to describe all that I like about it (well that's not true, I'm just being lazy). On another note: "...ultimately foiled by the fact that his opponents we not, as he had assumed..." the "we" should be "were" |
| Lizard13 2008-02-21 ch 4, | abuseI really like this story so far. Please continue because I want to know what happens next. :) |
| iSuccubus 2008-02-20 ch 4, | abuseAn amazing story! Love the plot and character interaction as well. |
| Oh No It's Mr Gibbles 2008-02-18 ch 4, | abuseGood Read :) |
| Vassago-Toxicity 2008-02-16 ch 2, | abuseI don't think I've ever read a fic that has Naruto actually giving nicknames that suit everyone, and make them so easily identifiable. So, Naruto knows who his mother and father are, that he has the Kyuubi sealed inside him, and his mind is also rather deep in the gutter of perverts. Rather good story if I do say so myself. Well, I can see how he's influenced by each person. Ibiki (Baldy) and Anko (Crazy Lady) made him a little more sadistic -- as shown by his willingness to use Interrogation on kids. Kakashi (Idiot) made him a bit less oblivious with his pervertedness (is that a word?) -- as shown by his understanding of innuendo. Some of Itachi's (Weasel-mask) calm, collected, logic (ever if he isn't so in canon[fucking weirdo]) attitude rubbed of on him, making him less hyperactive. Kurenai's (Nice Lady) affection affected him by making him want less acknowledgment from everyone, and instead just from a few people. She and Itachi basically 'removed' the hyperactive attention seeking part of him. |