 wolfwood3189 11/12/10 . chapter 1one word: |
 LoliPear the WaltzQueen 2/23/10 . chapter 6AW Adorable! |
 Railen 5/31/08 . chapter 6Aw, story done? That was sudden. :( I enjoyed it from start to the end, you did a nice one on here. |
 Railen 5/31/08 . chapter 5Seems like reactions can be made without the previous action happening.
Wow, that was weird. 0.o Lol, I already see Xana's monsters attacking Odd by scratching his ears. |
 Railen 5/31/08 . chapter 4William is normal on Lyoko! *dances* William and Ulrich get powned by Sissi... *yells booh* This story barely makes sense, does it? That's how I know you. Good one, cute and funny. |
 Railen 5/31/08 . chapter 3Odd's weakness has been revealed..
Say, what is Aelita doing in the tower actually? It makes me curious. Can't be just deactivating. Does Sissi do anything usefull on Lyoko?
Sissi x Odd is cute in this story. It never will be one of my pairings though.. Just, the Sissi-ness. :O |
 Railen 5/31/08 . chapter 2*laughes at Odd* ... *laughs again* ... *keeps laughing* ..
Oh my god. XD Special story you got there. |
 Railen 5/31/08 . chapter 1You got to be kidding me! Roflz. How did Sissi end up in Lyoko? Or do I need to read the Toy Soldier-story to know that? Rather original, but strange.
I love the not-too-long intro. |
 Terran34 1/9/08 . chapter 6ive made it a point to read and review your stories. This story was good! typo on chapter 5 though... :) I liked how you made Sissi be nice for once. She was so annoying in the main series. Purring? That part had me cracking up. (gained me a few stares from my brother too.) keep writing kittyclaw! |
 BenRG 1/2/08 . chapter 6"You drove a bus in the army, Jim?" "I really don't want to talk about it." Then why did you mention it? 8)
That was a nice little ending. I liked how Ulrich and Yumi used the... er... distraction of the fireworks. Knowing those two, neither of them expected the other to enjoy it so much.
I've said this before but I like how you have characterised Sissi. You have never stopped writing her as Sissi. You managed to make the character a romantic interest without losing her edge. Well done in that achievement!
BenRG's Overall Rating: 7/10 |
 Joe Lyons 1/1/08 . chapter 6 It's me, JoeSkierCO, but I'm not logged into my account cuz I'm on my mom's laptop. I really want you to make a sequel involving Odd getting humiliated again, but it's your choice. Also, check out my story called Mirror Image. Happy New Year kittyclaw! |
 Burakku's Shadow 1/1/08 . chapter 6Aw...! *squeals* That was so sweet! X3
I hope you saw the youtube "clippies" I put in my portfolio -I think they're pretty cool! *sways from side to side as one song vibrates through head*
Oh- and Happy New Year's Day!
Burakku's Shadow/Manjoume-Enchantress |
 brave kid 1/1/08 . chapter 6whoa great ending to a great story,well don't worry i have tons of ideas for you in 08 ok.
thanks again for giving my ideas a chance ok |
 DayDreamer9 12/31/07 . chapter 6HAPPY NEW YEAR! XD Aw, the cuteness of New Year's youth XD Well done _ |
 BenRG 12/30/07 . chapter 5Oh, now that is a lovely touch. It is /so/ in-character for Sissi to buy Odd what amounts to a collar. What is the bet that the pendant reads: "Hi! My name is Odd! If you find me, please contact Sissi Delmas, care of Kadic Academy" then the school switchboard number. :-p
I'm afraid that Odd is right, Ulrich. We all are whipped in the end. You will find that Yumi has some little ways of demonstrating 'ownership'. I hesitate to think what Aelita might have done to Jeremie ;-)
BenRG's Rating: 7/10 |