I love this! Please hurry and update! I know it's been a long time since you've probably gotten a review, but... I'm begging!

I have found a new story to be addicted to. It's terrible! I am hooked on three or four stories and now I have a ANOTHER! Wow that was good. I found only three errors in the whole thing, and they were..."It was a *tone* of blood" *ton* and two others where there was no 'f' in 'if'. But this story is wonderful, please, feed me more

It's very good so far, and I hope you don't leave it hanging!

It was annoying to have to leave the story, go to your page, then go to your livejournal just to read the beginning though. They do allow lemons on you just rate it differently, it'd be much easier for readers. Or you could just sort of summarize it in the beginning instead so the ppl who don't want to read a lemon don't miss things that they will need to know further in the story.

Wow, great start or what, I really like it so far! And the first scene was great and steamy, yay, I love smut, but then again who doesn't? Anyways, the plot seems very interesting and I really like how you portray Mugen and Fuu, of course, haha!

So, I'm wondering what's gonna happen now, please update soon so we can find out!

WOW! This story is great. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I like this so far! Could do with a little proof reasing, though ;)

that was quite amazing, i must admit (:

none of it was too romantic or too easy - just right.

realistic in Mugen's logic and even in the coincidences that happened to fuel the story.

you're very good at interpreting Mugen's character, and why he does what he does.

i especially liked the section you left out (the one in your lj); the world needs more smut writers such as yourself!

i'm very looking forward to more!

m... it seems really interesting. i wanna know more. so update asap please.

I love your writing style - and this 're-write' of canon is no exception. I am glad to see you back, and I really can't wait to see your newer version of 'MTLO&W'. (I was wondering what happened to it...!) ;D What is kinda cool is that you make Mugen a real shit, but when he gets too shitty you draw back and add some sweetness to the pile. Nicely done. Can't wait for the next chapter so keep the updates coming.

Read the official first chapter - nice ;)