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| partyrockstar100 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abusei know some people said it was too short..but i thought it was good just the way it was. i liked it that short honestly. idk why but i think any more would ruin that little thought of sasuke. good story anyways |
| CuteDarkAngel345 2007-12-11 ch 2, | abuseIt's okay but why are your chapters so short? I don't want to be mean but your chapters are really short. |
| kageNOhikari8 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseAnd this was suppose to be...? |
| summerlover1 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseI no this says that its complete but this would be a great long story, this could be the beginning and then add random times when shes breaking through the mask or something! awesome oneshot hipe u consider continuing it |
| firefairy2917 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseawsome begining keep writen! |