Sweet fudge, that was a good story! It's one of those stories where every little thing just made me smile. Incredibly well-written!

great chapter I really enjoyed this XD

Great chapter, great story

yeah go Ed stick up for Zimmy, good chapter

I love Zimmy, I know he likes us humans he'll never admit it, good chapter the Edds rock, XD.

haha those Edds and their jawbreaker needs good chapter

hahaha poor Zim, great chapter

Zim might be in some trouble here XD, good chapter

Gir and Ed a great friendship XD, great chapter

Zim rules, so do the Eds, good chapter XD

lol great chapter everyone is in perfect character

"Cool." XD, Ed's so funny, good chapter

heh, heh good start

Lol, that was kinda epic in a totally fail sort of way. xD

Your EdGir interaction was beautiful, lol. I'd never noticed how similar they are until now. The static electricity BOMB pretty much made my night.

I could definitely see a lot of the things in this actually happening. (Like Sarah destroying Zim for ruining the snowman, among other things) Some of it did seem a little far-fetched, but that's author's license for ya! Also, physics can definitely go and suck it; the huge bolt of flaming electricity was the best, and it was totally convenient.

Haha, thanks for the entertaining read!

you should make a part 2 you know like a ship crashes in eddys backyard,and some how the eds fix it and they head to zims homeworld and somehow become invaders and then they mistake taks new ship for the massive,but now the ship is owned by the resisty now,and it all ends in a big space battle,and ed gets his own GIR and minimoose.oh and see if you can add this character to any fan fics your working on

character name:Trey

clothing:long sleeve green shirt,blue pants,and black shoes

hair color brown

he is from another universe