It looks like a lot could happen I would like you continue this.

PLEASE CONTINUE! i luv it!

o i gots an idea have yumi say too tired to ,ove and u;rich just picks her up and carries her to the bed then gives her a good night kiss that would be sweet of him

it was interesting and funny i hope you post agian soon

you NEED to continue wrinting!

Why the heck did u say the first chapter is pointless? Anyway...lovin it...can't wait till the next chapter!!

I luv it! Please write more, and describe Holly, too. Did the others change their outfits? Describing here! Thank you, see ya next chapter!

can't wait till next chapter!

hahaha. nice chapter

really cool

Update :)

ohh i can already tell this is going to be one heck of a story! cant wait for the next chapter! upadate soon! : ]

The "pointless" first chapter was good! Keep goin!

Me liking the story. Can't wait for chappie 1!
Update soon!

groovy start man make funny its good to laugh

pretty good start