I love the way it's going so far and I'm glad it doesn't seem over! also, jake and Eve make an adorable couple! but it's completely up to you if you want to redo it, I personally think it's great! the only thing I'd change would be maybe add in bella's feelings a little more. If I know Bella she'd be doubting herself and would be jealous. hehehe. anyways... love the story!

YOU should defrenetly keep going the way you are.

its awsome

plez continu im dyin to read the end plez plez plez

Aw! Good job! UPDATE SOON!

Bye for now!

Stacie-Ann

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Amazing puh-leeze write more!

wow!11

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the relationship b/w Eve & Jake is really compelling. it makes me feel kinda bad though, b/c in my story i'm not so sure Jake will end up in such a nice place. but it's really good, only a few mistakes with grammar and plurals. otherwise though, it's wonderful. please keep writing, you've got me hooked!

yea edward can be stupid.. but not as much as jake i hate him with a passion - please dont make him cause crap it would ruin the story a bit

good chapter! i'm glad eve doesn't want edward! update soon!

soon soon? :)

I love your story, especialy eve's character! Please keep on writing.

Very good chapter. well writing and suspenseful. I hope you write more soon. ]

why is ch2 the same as chapter 1? write more!

interesting, update soon!