aww that was cute. The way it should have been.

Really like this story. GJ.

x

that was cool and kind-of funny at some parts. you also stole my name! carmen! mine!mine!mine! lol i'm hyper hehe

this is good..I hope this isnt only a oneshot! lol

aww that was really sweet, god story

so cute..and I'm glad they had a daughter after all of the pain Rose went through! GJ!

Wonderful. I love it, Alanna! It's 'mazin ;] Make more soon!

Amanda x

(JUMPS OUT OF HER SEAT AND RUNS AROUND THE HOUSE SQUEALING SERIOSULY!) I LOVE IT I LOVE IT OMG CARMEN YA AH It was so kawia! ! ! ! ! ! CUTE! adorable1! HAHA QUIZER WITH JEALOUSY FELOW READERS THIS IS MINE MUAHAHHAHAHA(hides story ina shiny box) and none of u cna take it form me muahahahahah I love it more then anyone could imagine! its so wonderful and U MADE JACK LIVE AGAIN YEAA! IT GOES IN MY FAVORITES