nononono dont say that! this story was GREAT! u shud continue it! an yes i made me happy! right now i hav a big grin on my face! :D

^.^ Don't worry about this~ Omg~ XD I thought the ending was really cute, and I really >did< smile. XD

This is a good read, and makes me smile, a lot! Their date is cute, and the kiss in the locker room, absolutely yummy. Thanks for sharing your writing :D AtoTez is my OTP too

This was fantastic! I loved it so much. I always thought that Atobe would feel guilty for doing that to Tezuka's shoulder at some point. I liked how you kept them IC, which is so hard to do sometimes, since Atobe is so out there and Tezuka isn't which makes them a really good pair. I can't wait to read more of your work.

I think this fanfic was written wonderfully, you shouldn't downgrade your writing like that. :D I'm sorry, but as much as I loved the last few paragraphs, I found the last sentence as not much of a sum-up. Um, maybe you could try:

As soon as the words left his mouth, Atobe's smirk widened, and the hidden messege under his words just became clear to Tezuka.

"I meant-"

"Of course, Tezuka," the diva replied sarcasticlly, "Of course."

= = ok, that was horrible. I'm sorry, but maybe inspiration will come later? The ending wasn't as bad as you said though, I found it quite cute. ^-^ keep posting these stories :D!