This is such a funny story!

lol! Hikari wants to buy bras? o.0 poor Ash XD

I don't particularly like Ash x Dawn. However, that does not stop me from loving this fic into itty bitty pieces. And that is the sign of a good fic.

The humor permeating the fic is fabulous, and Dawn & Ash's dorky naivete is adorable. I also love Brock as the disgruntled big brother. (Relatedly, OMG you acknowledge Brock's existence! That's pretty rare in fics, sadly.)

Bottom line: I love this fic, and the lack of updates makes me a sad panda.

You're doing a great job! The story is really funny and I'll look forward to the next chapters. One thing is bugging me though, why would Ash called Pr.Oak instead of his mum for these kind of things ?

Hi-lar-i-ous.

This story is cute, yet creepy at the same time. Anyway, this story is cool!

I'm shadowphantomness on Anyways, I really liked this story! It's cute and in character and I feel sorry for Brock! *laughs* Please update soon!

...Oh good lord...
These two really need some sex ed.