You should write stories because you want to, not to get reviews. This is good though; I want to see where the Clara/Ed relationship goes, and how Ed will bring down the chief of police. Don't you? :)

The story is great u actualy tortured the poor guy .i have a question ed is portrayed as badass yet shy and sweet in the anime these are 2 totaly different things hows that even possible i get confused what to portray him in such situations.

I love the story and I can relate to it easily. You should continue with the story.

Ah I love this story so far. All of your stories are good, but I have a certain fondness for Ed/Clara. It's a shame there aren't that many stories out there with the pairing. I hope you'll update soon :)

Well here is your review... Happy? D I love the story so far...Ed and Psiren. Never expected that! Wow...um...I'm speechless. I love the way you write! It's not to formal. Well update when you can...Ed's a virgin? I thought by now he and Winry would of hooked up since he DID get taller somehow. D

I LOVE this fic. I've been thinking back to Psiren alot as of late and I would love it if you would continue this or at least get to the Ed/Psiren lemon parts because, my God the way you wrote Psiren's undressing scenes was the stuff of legend. Please, please, ,PLEASE continue

I find it so cute how Ed gets all worked up over her. It's really good so far, like your other stories. I hope you write more chapters .

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!