that was a good story!

So sad. But it seems that there is hope for the two of them yet, though poor Tyler. Great writing though with an interesting style of using those emotions as an onset of the past events. Great job!

I like it, but it seems...incomplete.

Aww . . . That was really good, and also really sad. Hope that you are feeling a little bit better now. :-)

wow..that's so sad!

SO Cute! Update soon!

was it a oneshot? if it wuzz it wuzz realy gud...no jk...lollz...=]

loved it update soon

Koichi! You know I love it, and other people will love it as well. Just wait and you'll see! It's very sad, but very nicely written. Love it. :)