YAY Hodges and Greg friend moment! love it!! This really should have happend in the show!!


Hey check out my Greg fanfic.. well Greg and Reed Garrett ( CSI NY)

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Tell me what you think.

That was great!

*clenches teeth*
Next...year...
YOU FREAKING $%$&*O)?>.;'?!@#!
YOU DON"T END THINGS LIKE THAT!

Heehee... that shrink sure was weird... although he was pretty funny. Oh, and just so you know, Natalie calls Monk Mr. Monk, not Adrian. I watch the show alot, especially since my uncle is a writer of the show. XD

~EG~

AH! This story is bee-yond fantastic! I fully heart you, skeletalwings or who over you really are! Keep the Sandle coming (I'm sugar high! WO!)

~Gema~

I can't wait for the sequal! I love Greg! Epecially when it's SARA and Greg! I'll be searching for the sequal

Bum Bum Bum...
Sorry, I just love saying that. Another cooly cool chap.

*applause* Nicely done!

The scene with the psychiatrist was just the closure we needed, it indicated you didn't just use him as a plot filler, then discarded him in his office, you brought him back (and woke him up) long enough for us and Greg to say thank you and good-bye! Still getting used to slightly more mature Greg:

“Thanks for understanding. To be honest, I didn’t think you’d be able to…” I felt pretty bad about telling him my honest opinion, but I wouldn’t be a man for lying to him.

All in all a great story - wonderful plot, great timing, very good dialogue, spot on characters, nice scenes - wow! I really enjoyed this!

All the best to you and yours this holiday season!

Lerrinus

Aw, sorry to hear there's a break. But yes... having an outline, or at least SOME idea of what you're going to write next, it does help a bit.

Are you going to be posting it as a seperate fic? If so, can you send me a msg letting me know the title that it's going to have/does have?

Too lazy to log in, heh.

Oh wow, this has been SO great. And the fact that you're continuing it is even better. You have such a great sense of humour. I laugh at least three times in each chapter - the happier ones of course. Greg is so in character too. Love it!

Keep on being excellent! =)

Aw that can't be it! lol Good story! Can't wait for the next part!

Oh by the way, Greg doesn't need a passport to go to San Francisco... I believe you only need a passport to go out of the country and he's staying within the country. Just thought I'd let you know! :)

Interesting talk...

I wonder how Grissom's feeling about Greg going to visit Sara, and learning that Sara's been making a better attempt to contact Greg than she is Grissom.

I hate GSR... it makes no sense to me!

I think that conversation between Grissom and Greg went a lot better than I thought it would be! Great job! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow, 3rd time in a row... I thought the 3rd time was supposed to be the charm?

Yeah! go, Greg go! What was that about love being madness? Yeah! Greg could have kept standing and maintained some sort of superior position on Grissom but he levelled the playing field:

Best we keep all the variables equal, and our only weapons our tongues.

Me like! Yup, he's gone an insane! :-)