Wow, poor Baralai. I can only imagine how awkward that was for him and I loved how you wrote out Nooj's subtle reaction upon seeing Baralai. "Slight recoil."

This was a very nice read. I enjoyed it a lot.

That was brilliant! lovely desription and poor Baralai! thats hrad to deal with! You wrote that wonderfully!

I like that Baralai managed to refrain himself from murdering his nemesis. What I really enjoyed was that you could see how conflicted Baralai was and how much he really wanted to let Nooj have it for what he had done to him and their squad-mates. The tension was strong and it was almost as if one was in the room to watch it all unfold. I do wonder what went through Nooj’s head the entire time.