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| Fate 2008-06-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love this! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| QOShea 2008-05-28 ch 2, | abuseInteresting story, looking forward to see where it goes. |
2008-05-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseYee! This fic is so fun and so interesting and so unique!! |
| Death's Spear 2008-05-18 ch 2, | abuseOdd...but good. I haven't read a Naruto/Starwars crossover like this one for nearly two years. LD 1149's is a crossover involving the same stories, however, his is a lot different. Anyways, I can't wait to read more. Ja Ne. |
| WraithRune 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseAn original Naruto crossover!! I like it =D Keep on writing. |
| SaitouuRyuuji 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuseI'm really liking this I can't wait for the next chapter. Haha I'm on the edge of my seat. Please update as soon as possible. :D ~SaitouuRyuuji~ |
| Connie 2008-04-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseHehhee! I love crazy crossovers, but only when they are done as awesomely as this one. Seriously, I was giddy and bouncing in my seat reading this, and I will continue to be waiting for an update. In the meantime, I'm gonna go and read your other stories. Keep up the great writing! |
| Spork or Foon 2008-04-13 ch 2, | abuseIhaven't come across a crossover of these two fandoms... you're doing a great job though! I wonder what's up with the whiskers on Shmi, maybe to show where they're from? Anyway, great so far hope to see more soon ^_^ |
| animefan29 2008-04-03 ch 2, | abuseVery good. Well written, interesting concept, good plot. It kind of sounds like they are riding in a Sandcrawler, which normally did not have repulsor lifts, and instead had a pair of treads. Question: How many years has Naruto been in the Star Wars universe? Because it sounds alot like it's been more then three years. |
| gaul1 2008-04-03 ch 2, | abuseinteresting so far, byes |
| SmacksKiller 2008-04-02 ch 2, | abuseVery nice, I'm curious as too how this will turn out. |
| Weasel Fu 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseI really like this one so far. So how is Naruto going to get the Skywalkers away from Watoo? He can't just kick his butt 'cause that would be stealing and would bring down the law on him. I'm also thinking that Anakin was about 8 or so in Star Wars I, so unless Naruto's age is just being mistaken I guess the Jedi guys never ran across Anakin? It would be kind of funny when the Jedi show up if the language barrier causes them to think that his species is "shinobi". "These shinobi, where is their home world?" I can see a powerful, charismatic Naruto being able to gather quite a following among force-sensative people who have been rejected for Jedi training. Naruto, having few social skills due to his social isolation, would probably tell the Jedi exactly where they can shove their agro-corp if they tried to tell him that it was his only option. I don't think the Jedi have the right to force people to take their training, they just get them as babies and they never know there is anything else. Naruto also has a pretty good sense of honor and fair play for a ninja (who are technically supposed to be backstabbing weasels, anything to get the job done after all). I think that Naruto would have a very clear sense of what is right and wrong and would tell the Jedi that they can stuff their pacifistic ideals because he's a shinobi who follows his emotions and keeps his promises. The no-emotions thing the Jedi all aspire to is the exact opposite of Naruto's way of doing things, maybe it is a fundamental difference between the Force and Chackra? Itachi is seen as being one of the least emotional shinobi and he's a psychopath. Or maybe it's just that the Jedi are so afraid of falling to the dark side (constantly using the Force with negative emotions) that they cut off all emotional use of the force and are actually only using neutral force, not positive or negative. Also, a prophecy that Anakin will bring balance to the force? If balance means that dark and light are equal then who wants it? What they should want is for the light to be stronger than the dark. That never made sense and since it didn't seem to happen (there was not a Sith to equal every Jedi, and the light side doesn't seem to be weaker since more people are using it) then was the whole prophecy a fake? If so, why bring it up at all? Anyway, I really like the idea of this story and hope that you continue with it. |
| HecatonchiresLM 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseNice foreshadowing around Anakin ^_^ |
| Ujikofuda 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseDo you know how rare it is to find a good crossover fanfiction? You and the story are amazing. I also love how you decided it will be a frame narrative. Keep on going. I'm definitely watching you. |
| Bobboky 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abusecool |