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XxTaintedxDaggerxX 7/2/09 . chapter 1
Can't wait to read more! Please update!
Dreedle007 2/28/09 . chapter 1
aw..! don't tell me you gave up on this story.

I liked it and i was hoping to keep reading but...

*sigh* just don't give up

kay?
angel61991 10/3/08 . chapter 1
interesting please update soon.
Pinnacle of Madness 1/22/08 . chapter 1
Very cool. Please continue. .

Happy writings!
Corvin 12/30/07 . chapter 1
Awhh! This looks SO cute so far! I love it! And yes, that date sounded so romantic. I went to this dinner/theater place and this cute guy in a quartet thing called Forever Plaid sang Stranger in Paradise, ZOMG I was so charmed it was ridiculous. Now I've decided that should I ever get a man and not be a lonely old spinster, I'd like him to sing for me. But only if he can sing :3 ... This is pointless.

But yeah! GAWD! I love Kankurou so much! XD Busting into a room like that, what a silly willy walnut head! Thinkin' of em, maybe pairing him up with anybody? D

Also! Do I totally owe you a oneshot O
Juanaxu 12/6/07 . chapter 1
Great, wonderful.

Yes, I read it, or rather, I skimmed it.

Now go update Kyuubi...Pease? _

And get on GTalk too.
Yue-Yue 12/1/07 . chapter 1
Omg, I love your begining so far!

I really hope this ocntinues because

the plots seems interesting.Plz

continue this story!
purewhiteriver99 11/29/07 . chapter 1
hm... my advice would have been to have a chapter before this, to get more of a feel for the characters and everything before jumping right into it... like how it mentioned that gaara is usually really quiet and they don't talk that much... it said it, but it would have been better to show it a tiny bit... like a prologue, or something...

anyway, past the advice, this was pretty good. it looks cute, and gaara's so adorable when he blushes... ooh, and the shikatem, as well... i love shikamaru...god, i wish i had a boyfriend so that he could take me on a date like that...shikamaru's smart that way.

i'm curious to see how their father is... and if anything has happened... or will happen. with neji, as well. he sounds pretty cute... heh, i love the whole description of his hair. it really is so pretty...

the whole part in the summary intruiged me. i've read a few stories so far where gaara was a painter, and i really like it, and this seemed even more interesting with how he can paint a person in more of a... well, i can't really think of a word right now, but how he can see a person for who they are. i like that as a talent of his...

anyway, it looks interesting, and i'm curious to see where you will take it, so i'll be waiting for the next chapter! )
Analei 11/28/07 . chapter 1
That was very adorable with Gaara able to obtain some sibling time. I think that is quite cute.
GuysLikeYouMakeUsLookBad 11/27/07 . chapter 1
Awesome.

Nice spelling and grammar, I'm sick of stories that lack them. :D

Write more please.
Deleted by fanfiction 11/26/07 . chapter 1
there all to ooc. i like the plot line though! please update!
ShinigamixGirl 11/26/07 . chapter 1
O_o..This is really cute...but Gaara is a bit too quiet...and there is no scary air around him? Its a bit OoC. :/ But its still cute anyways and i still love it. 3
Hanai-kun 11/26/07 . chapter 1
Nee, this is good!

I'm glad Gaara isn't denying he's gay.

And Kankuro's such a pervert! xDD

Such loud family, so thin walls.

And yes, Shika and Temari's date was romantic!

Aah, Gaara does have a good taste in.. guys! xD

Neji is beautiful! And not just because of the hair. xD

I like the pairing too!

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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