This would be a great music video.

you did a good job, A. especially enjoy the song _;; anyways, yeah, good job

Oh my god.. That was really..really good. Really, really sad. Wow..

Hmm.. I'm beginning to like your style of writing. Like it very much. Keep on writing!

holy crap, that was awful! i don't mean your fic; it was amazing, but just imagining David like that...awww :( That poor boy, he needs therapy. Or a big hug :)

Have you considered therapy?

My baby! *clutches David* Oh,is he yours? Well,great ficcy,poor David. I always thought Senna was abusive,too. Hope to see more of your work soon!

Good job! I liked it!

Beautiful, elegant, and I didn't even know the tune!

Hey,Andrea,this is NOT the light hearted humor I expected from you! This is depressing(then again,the In fic is too. And all of my are)! But still,its a good song,and the imagery is painted all too well. Its on my favorites.

Yes, even though I have about zero knowledge on Everworld and I was talking to you on MSN when I read this, I still thought it was very well done. For your first attempt at writing a Vid-fic, you did a d@mn good job. Now Katelynn will wander back to the happy world of Final Fantasy VII and Deeber to hopefully find a Vid-fic where I actually know what happens in the series! Bye bye for now!