Reviews for Trials Of Life

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HEIDI 2008-08-27 ch 9, anon.	abuseCONGRATULATIONS ON THIS CHAPTER, INTERESTING LOVE LIFE OF ATOBE, BUT IT IS BEST TO PREGNANCY RYOMAAND ALTERATIONS HORMONE JAJA, TEZUKA HAPPY LIFE. IT WOULD BE GOOD WHICH TOOK CHILDREN AND IF THEY ARE AS A COUPLE´S SON ATOBE BEST JAJA, VERY EARLY TO DECIDE TRUTH?.
Jenny 2008-08-25 ch 9, anon.	abuseHmm... not much to say... my head is on overload right now. So many words. xD For some reason I think I'm in TezRyo withdrawal that I rather liked the BeGo-sama story than the chapter with Buchou-chan and Ryoma in it. O.o I've forgotten what it's like to love pillar pair!! It's the end of the world!! Or... it could mean I've been going through BeGo-sama withdrawal way longer than TezRyo that the story appealed to me more? =P Wasn't really a fan of the gay doctor, but it was a nice intermission. (With all the Ryoma-tummy rubbing comments.) xD As for the BeGo-sama story, loved it. Although, not really how I picture BeGo-sama unless it's crack, loved the story anyway. Your OC BeGo-sama wife wasn't annoying either so I applaud you. xD And you put Yuu-chan in it! Yay! What IS Yuu-chan's job? O.o BeGo-sama secretary? =P (Don't think Yuu-chan would really let himself be one unless he thought it would amuse himself to do free labor.)
iruka92 2008-08-22 ch 9,	abusei get overly excited when a mpreg fic shows up. xD
voilan 2008-08-20 ch 9, anon.	abuseYay! :D Echizen would make an adorably fussy mommy! >D I can imagine him struggling in even holding his baby while Tezuka would have no problems showering his love on the baby. Wah, Daddy Tezu would be LOVE. I bet Ryoma would love a little boy- though I bet he would raise his child way differently than how his dad raised him. Nanjirou would probably be forbidden to even see his grandchildren in the likelyhood that he'll traumatize him with his various and not-well-hidden porno. XD I love the gay doctor- he's the personification of many fangirls inner perviness-brought-out by smexy bishounen!! On the other hand, I bet Tezu would absolutely love a little girl to spoil silly! XD Hmm, maybe the possibility of grandchildren might bring Tezuka and his family (if not just his mother) together? I hope so. Oh, and Kirihara's given name is Akaya not Akira. Akira would be Kamio's given name. Speaking of which, if I may ask (aka beg) whatever happened to Fudoumine? I have a gut feeling it would take more than Tachibana's idol authority to stop Kamio from ruining An's wedding and killing Momo in the process. :D I can't believe Kamio isn't there to bother Momo over and over again and I wouldn't be surprised if Kamio held this grudge far, far, far longer than the bicycle incident. Hehe, I'm laughing myself silly when Ryoma has his baby shower. (if he's willing to, but it's probably going to be those surprise oh-my-god-what-the-hell-are-all-these-people-doing-here?!! ones that he'll be tricked into going) XD OMG, Fuji as a godfather! XD That'd be hilarious! Ah, I loved Atobe's sidestory. His poor wife, I'd smack Atobe silly (lawsuit or no) if he'd ever used that tone of language to me. >D I must agree, goldfish sized eyes should stay in glittery shoujo manga and never cross over into the real world. That would be far too terrifying. oo; Aww, Atobe Kei sounds so cute. I'm sosososo happy that the future Echizen-Tezuka baby (babies, perhaps? ;D) would have all these cutesy little playmates. Atobe and the Momoshiros. Hahaha, that's going to be one exciting if not stress ridden childhood. If the baby turns out to be a girl- well, Tezuka's gonna start popping some grays in his quest to violently dissuade his precious daughter's suitors. Heh, there's already a few candidates lining up. XD I'm curious to see how exactly Ryoma would handle a baby and especially his own. :) Keep up the awesome and captivatingly humorous work! XD Ganbatte! ... Inui and baby formula... shudder ~Oh, when you mentioned Fuji's wife in HEIDI's review response, I don't suppose that person is Hinari-san... is it? _ (hopeful eyes)
speadee 2008-08-20 ch 9,	abuseBeing drunk would make people more careless, and that's what happened that night. I can believe Echizen's reactions to the news. I think any guy would have difficulty with such news. Being so self-centered, he would more likely want to get rid of the child. At least, he has improved and wouldn't kill the child. I like how you put the gay doctor's POV in diary form. It would be typical for gays to start looking at other guys and saying things, such as "sexy." I'm glad he wasn't mad at Captain Tezuka for taking Echzien from him. I hope Tanuki doesn't spread rumors about the Echizens. I'm glad at least Nanjirou wanted to win fairly. I hope the security guards and fans didn't blame the Echizens for being biased to have Captain Tezuka go with them. I like it when Rinko scolds Nanjirou, and getting rid of the cigarette was funny. I expect Ryoma to not let his children near his father. Fortunately, Nanjirou is not spreading that unusual news. Then again, if he did, it would involve him and make him look bad. Good excuse for their absence! Good job showing how nosy reporters are and how hard it is to find a job! I wonder how Kunikazu and Kuniharu will react. They'll probably not be able to accept hermaphrodites, which means they'll get very upset and think worse about Kunimitsu. They might find ways to make him and Echizen's life more miserable. It's good that Captain Tezuka knows someone in gynecology. I hope Murasaki would really keep it confidential and not start blurting things out as she usually does. Actually, some women do have terrible morning sickness. Some don't just have it in the morning, but several times during the day. I've heard some say that their morning sickness lasted 4 months. So Captain Tezuka and Momoshiro live walking distance from each other? If Echizen wasn't able to walk much in his condition, how could An do it with the same condition? She's further along too. It's a good think Inui wasn't there, or he would probably start writing things down. Good think Oishi and An were there to keep Kikumaru and Momoshiro under-control. I knew those 2 guys were going to have trouble with the news. They better not be spreading the news as well as rumors around. Then again, Captain Tezuka would probably punish them. I knew someone antisocial like Echizen would hate baby showers. Not only would it be a hassle, the news would spread. The guys were lucky that An was there. Echizen is really going to need Murasaki and An for his condition. I can understand Captain Tezuka repeatedly bothering Murasaki about Echizen and already preparing for the baby's future. I would do the same. Good job on showing the business and politics of the rich people! I myself was getting confused by all that information. Well, I never understand politics. I can't help but hate Tanaki! He is always plotting, and doesn't even care about his daughter. Then he blames everything on others and tries to claim everything for himself. Did he even know he could have killed his daughter by trying to remove her from the hospital? Was he even aware of the procedures or divorce (papers, lawyers, and court)? I like how Captain Atobe really gave it to his father-in-law. Captain Atobe is spoiled by his parents. I knew he would have marriage problems with his arrogance and domineering behavior. Looks like he also hired Oshitari and Yanagi to work for him. I thought Yanagi would end up working with Inui, Captain Yukimura, or Sanada. Good idea for why Captain Atobe tried to force An on a date in the series! They would definitely not get along. I'm glad Kimiko found her interest and baking, got along with the maids and servants, and eventually worked things out with Captain Atobe. She really married too young. I think getting married at the ages of 17 and 20 is too early. That could explain some of the problems. Fortunately, things improved when they got older. I agree with Kimiko that "Keigo" and "Kei" can get confusing. At least it looks like a happy ending for them. Fuji's wife would probably be Hinari because besides Kimiko and Murasaki (who is with Itsuki), she is the only other female OC. Well, there are the nurses, but Hinari seems the most possible since she and Fuji are in grad school. They might have some classes together. Most highly-educated people marry late or don't marry at all. Actually, most of the regulars are not married yet. Momoshiro was the first to get married, followed by Captain Tezuka and Echizen. I'm not sure about Itsuki and Murasaki, but all the other Seigaku regulars aren't married yet.
hyperdude 2008-08-16 ch 9,	abuseIt's always nice to see hwo Ryoma has matured, especially at this point of time where he thinks the situation with his baby through. They are so cute, our little pillar pair. +heart+
Rococophile 2008-08-15 ch 9,	abuseTEZURYO: I like it, but I'm getting the feeling that Ryoma is going to go through that depression some new mothers do. The Ryoma in this story seems less mature than the one in "Echizen, Our Bucho". I hope Ryoma will be ok after giving birth, because one of your oneshots scared the heck out of me (I cried because of that!) with Ryoma giving birth and dying. ATOBE-SAMA's SIDE STORY: I like it. It's just the way I imagined a marriage with Atobe would be like. Good job Atobe-sama!
novvy 2008-08-14 ch 9, anon.	abusei can't wait for an update... hurry up ok.. it's so sweet to see how tezuka treat ryoma, and all about the insurance thing just add all up.. i really want to see them with a daughter. a really cherful girl, cos both of them are just soo... dull, they ned something to spice up their life.. keep up the good work..
kaerie 2008-08-13 ch 9, anon.	abusei think Fuji will end up with Hinari-chan. The one whom Tezuka's grandfather set up with him...anyways, i think she and Fuji will be a perfect match since they have similar characteristics (such as their uncanny observation)...
rebeccasanfujieijilvr 2008-08-13 ch 9,	abusecant wait 4 more^^ update sooner^^
flying jade 2008-08-12 ch 9,	abuseHinari she is going to be fuji wife... they would be so great together... and its perfect she will meet him in college...yay... anyways awesome story... hope you update soon...
Neko Raiga 2008-08-12 ch 9,	abuseI LOVE Kimiko!! --laughs-- and Atobe...--giggle-- I'm seeing Atobe Keigo in a COMPLETELY different light! HAH! XD
TeNsHi No ToIkI 2008-08-12 ch 9,	abuseomg pls dun turn ryoma into a girl! i lyk him as a guy! n hope its a boy=) more fun that way... n luved ur atobe side story! he managed to get a happy ending! yay! but fuji somehow appears e least in e story T.T... n i realised nanako rarely appears now also... shrug... ah well... atobe is happy! thx for updating n update soon!
The Night Owl is Addicted 2008-08-12 ch 9,	abuseAhahaha! You're a genius! It's amazing how you can have all this humor while still being in-character. XD It's just endlessly amusing- the doctor's diary, the reactions of the regulars', everything! The flow of the story is just great and I can't wait till the next chapter. Good luck with your thesis! Atobe's side story is just awesome, too! (Yes, Atobe, I am awed XD) You write a nice Atobe. (nods) And it was very interesting. Lovely, lovely chapter!
Gothbrat 2008-08-12 ch 9,	abuseI hope Ryoma doesn't die! There are way too many stories out there where Ryoma dies giving birth so please don't kill him! I'll cry then cry some more and then you will pay! J/K XD Can't for your next update though!

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