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| irony882 2008-08-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was embarrassing! I admit it, Booth has the biggest guts imaginable to do that! I also like that part about Booth's pink socks. It discreetly added a little humor to a serious situation. |
| brennanknight 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseaw loved it their tension is cool and im only on second epi haha |
| GGjunkie33 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseCool idea, I really like your spin on the ending of this episode! Loved your closing lines, I've noticed that you're very good at writing endings, which is really hard for me, so good job! |
| 9ud9ir190ne6ad 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute!! Brill! |
| bb-4ever 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abusegreat alternative ending. but does she feel the same? look forward to more from you |
| teaspoons 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseaw, I think I like this kind of humiliation :P |
| PurplePicklesUnite 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseAw how sweet! Great ending. |
| Christine Geyer 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseHaha, that was great! Nice idea, and well written! |
| Owl Emporium 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseAw that was sweet...but I wanted her to tell him "I loved you too!" lol. Still loved it though! :] |
| Howdylynn 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI liked her response at the end. Pretty funny. Made me laugh. Thanks for that. ;) |
| diggingupbones 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseAw... You have to continue! Please! I never would have thought he would say that to her, and... aww. I want to know what happens next! Don't leave me hanging! Lol. Continue! Please? :) |
| Laby Anne Boleyn 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abusevery cute! |
| CaCD 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abusethat was cute... and so perfect! love it!! |
| jerseybones 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really well-done ending. Since I'm such a mushball I thought I'd be disappointed by the non-kiss, but no I'm not. Your ending was better than anything contrived or cliche. I actually think it was pretty damn perfect. |
| MsGiggles 2007-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI wish YOU had written that episode! Your story was perfect, totally in character and very sweet. (No, not "Sweets"!) |