Great great job I could barely stop reading this story the only times I had to stOp was for sleep and school work other wise I couldn't stop reading thank u

This was good and sad at the same time.

very well written! Great stuff,great job!

Wow! This was an amazing fic.

The last chapter made me cry!

Truly amazing.

Alexz

Dude, you're not supposed to do permanant damage to people! I mean sure it's okay to beat them and scar them some, but never the face! And certainly not removing an eye!

wow i just finished your whole fanfiction...

and you a freggin amazing!

i loved ti right amount of action and great detail in character growing. you seem to know alot about all the characters as if you watched all the cartoons and watched the moveis over and over again...

well this is a favorite story that will NEVER ;eave my favorites lsit... thank you your story has made this week a great onE!

oh yeah! greast story do far, it tortured me to have to wait 4 hours to finish reading after school today

wow your stories are really good..i think you are my fav writer..maybe your stories could end up being published..who knows but keep up the good work!

I loved this story. t was so well writen. I think I have read it abou five times already and have just begone to read it once more. The bottm line is keep writing kid you have a gift.

wow. this was amazing! absolutely amazing! i was in tears countless times. good job!

like it so far, just got to read the rest

you're being mean to Scottie! Pweese pweese let him have revenge later

loved this! absolutly loved it. Almost cried when Jean and Storm was raped. ;-; to bad kurt hadn't a bigger role but glad storm had. :)

A beautiful ending to a great story. I dont know how you could top this one with a sequel, but I sure it would be great. Thanks.

Actually, you might want to change the French inscription. It should probably be something a little more like this:

Adieu, ami bien-aimé. Ton lumiére est éteignée bien plus tôt que ton légende.

Literally: Farewell, well-loved friend. Your light was extinguished (or snuffed out) well before (or far sooner than) your legend.

Internet dictionaries help, but there's no French verb for will...simply two tenses (one using the verb aller, to go, and another using future conjugations of the verb for what you're going to do) to indicate future tense. Volonté is your strength of mind, determination. The proper word for burning out, or going out, is éteindre, though it does imply being put out or snuffed out rather than burning out volontarily (might be appropriate for this situation).

Good luck!