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A Heart on my Hand
2009-10-07 . chapter 1
I like this, it kinda sounds like an old folktale the way you wrote. I wish you wouls've more of an entry though.
fantasyrider-kh
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
Oh man.
This is the best PaintedBlue fic I have EVER read.

I'm not kidding.
I love the Blue Spirit/Painted Lady aspect of Zutara so much, and you just fulfilled every subaspect of the subaspect of the ship I love.

Faved. Consider yourself +{Author Alert}'d, awesome writer.
zutarababe
2008-10-15 . chapter 1
that was so beautiful. i like it. nice job
saki yume kira hanajima
2008-08-01 . chapter 1
wow...that was...breathtaking...and beautiful...
Anser
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
wow. that was awesome. great story, brilliant writing, keep it up!
Scarlet Elixir
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
so good- much much love
Silent angel
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
Beatuiflly crafted, exeptionally well executed... i dont know if theres much more to say other than.. AWESOME!!
ilovegoogoodolls
2008-01-03 . chapter 1
hey that was a great read!! it sounded like it came out of a movies script or sumthin... and their attraction was effectively shown tho not in a trashy PG rated way.. great endin too...since im not such an avid watcher of avatar some of it that wouldnt normally make sense was so well ritten out that it did... and great endin... keep writting u obviously hav great talent!
signed
johnzina
katara's twin
2007-12-23 . chapter 1
Wow, and you're pretty young too, well, older than me. You sound better than some grown authors' stories that I have read. You really inspire me to make my fan fiction story [if I ever get it up] the best it can be. Please don't quit writing and just stay true to yourself.

Katara's Twin
omar
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
you finally got your ZUTARA...excellently penned tho..keep it up
Spleefmistress
2007-12-09 . chapter 1
Truly an excellent story!
titania61194
2007-12-08 . chapter 1
Beautiful beyond belief!! I loved it - it was wonderfully written - the way you brought in the events happening in the show was amazing. You did an awesome job on this!
BlueEclipse
2007-12-07 . chapter 1
Wow. I loved this story! You are such a great writer, and the way you told this... I can't describe it. I loved the ending. If only this would happen on the show!
Fallin' From Grace
2007-12-04 . chapter 1
Moon Spirit from ASN again... I said I'd review your story, so here goes.

I like how you incorporated The Painted Lady and The Blue Spirit, and had them connect, not as Zuko and Katara, but "spirits" with a common goal. I've read way to many mushy, out-of-character Zutaras, so this was a refreshing change. I don't have much to suggest, just keep writing!! You gave me a little inspiration for a Bluetara poem(?).

BTW- nice way to wrap up Kataang!!
Thura Huodae
2007-12-01 . chapter 1
AHH! SEQUEL!
~Thura Huodae
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