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| OceanFae 2008-07-17 ch 23,  | abuseI LOVE this chapter! Very well written, my dear. |
| OnMyKnees 2008-06-22 ch 22, | abuseGreat. I really liked it. Update soon! |
| Inklover101 2008-06-09 ch 22, | abuseThat was an awesome chapter! I'm glad you kept writing, it's ok if you're busy...just try your best to update when you can.^^ |
| OceanFae 2008-06-09 ch 22, | abuseOh, I'm so glad you updated. You know how much I love this story, and I realy enjoyed this chapter. I hope you update soon! |
| Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-06-09 ch 22, | abuseYay, an update! *hugs* I know how it feels to feel less than confident about your writing. But I'm glad you pushed your way out of it! Now, all I have to say is...I'm getting a tad suspicious about where Duncan has gone to. Damn, now his name has me thinking about Donuts. Yummy... |
| OnMyKnees 2008-04-29 ch 21, | abuseGeeze having my laptop down stinks. I really have been meaning to submit a review, but my laptop has a crashed motherboard. Gr. Anyways. Very well done I like it a lot. Your writing has really developed. I am very intrigued. Update soon! |
| Princess-Kari-chan 2008-04-15 ch 21, | abusewow this is relly good plz update soon^^ |
| Inklover101 2008-04-09 ch 21, | abuseawesome chappie! loved it! please keep writing! |
| Inklover101 2008-04-09 ch 20, | abusethat was a very good chappie!! I didn't see this chapter on my alert, just the 21st chapt. I love the story! please right as long as you can!! |
| OceanFae 2008-04-09 ch 21, | abuseYeah, this is very good. Its like a good book; you cant wait to see what happens next. Congrats. |
| Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-04-09 ch 21, | abuseOh. My. God. I LOVE LOVE LOVE that you updated twice within the span of five minutes, but still! I want to see what happens next! I don't know whose side I'm on anymore, and I love it! |
| Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-04-08 ch 19, | abuseAh, so this King is a bit more involved than we thought...very interesting. I'll admit, I really liked the last Ch19 you had, before scratching it for this one...it really showed how strong Isabella was becoming. But this is good, too, because you can see that she's not so quick to forgive. Seeing him for the first time is a less cliche, "oh he's not so bad" experience. Although I liked having her take the gun from her friends, this does more for the story. Good job! |
| Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-03-25 ch 18, | abuseI really love this story. It's one of the best fantasy plots I've seen in a while, fanfic or no. Why'd you take chapter 19 off - I was in the middle of reading it! |
| OnMyKnees 2008-03-15 ch 19, | abuseVery interesting, but I'm not sure if I like the way Isabella is acting, she seems very violent and unlike herself. I'm not sure if there's a reason for that or not. I like the idea of her getting a back bone, but to me she just seems mean and arrogant. That may just be me though. I can't wait to see how the story develops. Update soon! |
| Heart-sketcher 2008-03-14 ch 19, | abuseOMG! -claps- Truely amazing. I love the way you have slowly developed her from a giggly child, to a strong woman who doesn't allow anyone to change her mind. Please keep them coming, It's getting so exciting now!! |