That was absolutely incredible! So creative and my God was it interesting. Great job!

Hey there!
Me again! Thought I'd read more of your stuff after Subaru.
And whoah man...you're stuff is deeper than the depths of the sea. I mean...wow. Good thing you clarified some stuff or I would have been lost and would have had to ask you another question. Heh.
Well, I like it well enough.
Really, you're writing is amazing and I didn't notice anything wrong with anything. That's how absorbed I was.
You really seem to get into the hard core darkness of the real world. I thought it was funny thoguh...St. Bernards's Academy...and they're all little Japanese students. :)
Well...I won't make this any longer so, GOOD JOB!
Rawr.
-INARI

Your story is one of the best I've ever read, and I'm being serious. I got it, I got it all, before you explained it. And I love what you made Sasuke say at the end "Thanks forgetting me." That was just clever. :)

Amazing. You write wonderfully. I loved it!